Bedazzled by five precious stones Ruby's yogic greeting 'Namaste', bestowed unbelievable gloss to the face.Many eyes were watching her and her closed eyes were connecting to God, through an ancient act rejecting 'I'.
Folding my hands just like Ruby, practising yoga I saw God winking.
- a foreign word or phrase
- five stones
- another time era
- wink
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I like this! You took the prompt and presented a multi-sensory experience in just a few words. Namaste.
This is totally awesome friend!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
You've done a good job with a quite unexpected approach.
Very creative!
Nice!
Ooh. I like this very much. Such a talent you have for conveying so much with so few words.
Wow that was an amazing - "write?" Very cool Buzzy - I don't know if I could have pulled this one off.
This is a beautifully rendered revelation. It is so tender, it seduces us to believe.
Great one, Buzz!
nice thanks for sharing..
Well done!
Very very refreshing and I am smiling at the whole drama.
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It has many gems in ur write up
Very nice ,Buzzy.
Beautiful blessing...
wonderful write!
Charming use of Susan's prompt!
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Excellent writing, Bhawana! Very enjoyable.
Good one, Buzzy!!!
This is great.
An excellent prose poem Bhawana. I love the surprisingly bright ending.
Perfectly enjoyable, Buzzy. My only suggestion is to change the title to Believe Me and then cut those words off the end.
I like the word yogic and hope I can find a place to use it myself. Thanks for taking on the prompt.
That's a brilliant change.Thanks,Susan.
I really *do* like how that looks and feels. :-)
same here,Susan!
I liked the feel and mental imagery this gave me. I'm not entirely certain about "bestowed unbelievable gloss to the face" ... gloss to the face? That's the only part I stumbled on. It had a very calm, serene feel, especially at the end. I like it!
Dear Barb,
You point is strong, for sure...now I am also thinking what's all about;)
Love and thanks.