“Beauty without virtue is a flower without perfume,” said the poet.
“D’you have no better lines?” asked the woman.
“Share your room with me,” he replied, too eagerly and perfume-free.
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Sheila Deeth
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February 1, 2007 The Poet - titled sentences challenge - a snippet
June 17, 2009 01:31 AM EDT
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“Beauty without virtue is a flower without perfume,” said the poet.
“D’you have no better lines?” asked the woman.
“Share your room with me,” he replied, too eagerly and perfume-free.
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Comments: 14
Uhuh. I'll bet he did. ;)
Lovely and sensuous.
At least in my imagination.
That's so naughty to a Puritan like me.
OMG! I'm doing John Wayne lines. Guess I need to perfect my drawl.
It is just clever and teasing. Wonderful.
they are alone
Hilarious! And clever. I am not familiar with the challenge.
Oh,my, Sheila...LOL
LOL. Very clever.
Excessively bold, but it works for some... I think.
I speak of the poet in the snippet.
Ha ha ha! The truth will come out.....great snippet!
Enjoyed the comments.