Walt heard Jake hollering to him to get down there quick and that he did !! When he saw that huge buck that Jake had taken down he let out a holler to his Pappy !! "Come on down here and look what Jake has caught I can hardly believe it myself !!" Wiley came trucking on down to where they both where with that huge buck. "Well, I'll be !! I knew there was a big ole buck thrashing around in these woods Jake. I'm mighty glad you caught him too. Let me help you and Walt dress him out cause I ain't done this in a long time. " With that said Wiley drew his knife from the case in his boot and said, "Where do you want to start Jake. ? I always do it in a way that you can save the whole hide I can show you how if you'd like me too ? " Jake looked at Wiley and how excited he was over this big buck he said," Sure Wiley. Go ahead and show me how you do it. " With a big grin on his face he went right to work and he was fast too !! He got that deer skinned faster than Jake had ever seen it done before !! Then they cut between the tendons on the back legs and put some heavy rope through the holes. The three of them hoisted that deer up on a huge branch of a near by tree, so they could cut it open and let the innards fall out into a big wooden box that Wiley had placed right under that deer.
They saved the heart, liver, and some other parts the dogs could eat after it was cooked up first. Melva had come out to join the men in case they should need her. They handed her the heart, liver and the other stuff they had set aside for the dogs. She had a huge piece of tarp and rolled it all up inside that and took it on home so she could wash it and cook the stuff for the dogs. She wrapped the heart and liver in cheese cloth and stuck it inside two leather pouches and put that in the cold spring to keep for a couple days.. Then she placed the large slab stone over the cold spring to keep the critters away from it. Then she went back to the house and pulled out a huge pot to cook the parts that Wiley had saved for the dogs. The men were finished cutting up that deer and were haling it up to the house. Then they dug a huge pit and lined it with big rocks and packed them down in the soil. The pieces of meat were wrapped up in leather and bound with strong cords. The men laid the pieces of meat in one layer, then put big rocks on top of it. Then they put wet reeds on top of the rocks to keep the meat moist. They knew it had to be eaten up very soon before it went bad. So that meat planning a huge feast and inviting all the folks they knew and that was plenty !! Then Jake figured he'd better be getting on back home cause he knew he had been gone for quite a long time and that Marietta would be looking for him, he thanked everyone for helping with the deer and started on down the path again for home.
Marietta was sitting on the porch snapping beans into a big pot of water when she saw Jake coming down the path. She stood up and said, " Jake, where the dickens have you been ?? I got worried when you didn't come right back." Jake said, " Sorry Marietta I didn't mean to worry you none, and went on to tell her about the big buck deer he had caught off guard. And there was going to be a big feast for everybody !! We'll go on down the road and tell all the folks they're invited. Then we can get to the reservation and invite all the folk from there !!" "We must eat first Jake. I made a nice stew for us to eat and some corn bread too. " They sat and ate the food she had prepared as soon as it was ready, then they went to spread the good news about the big feast !! First they stopped at Spirit Crows and Little Feathers. They heard laughter coming from down the road and saw them playing with Spirit Tree Owl. He had grown so much !! He saw them coming and turned to his Mother and Father as if to ask if it was alright to go greet Jake and Marietta. They nodded their heads yes to him and he ran into Jakes open arms !! Jake was yearning to become a father. He wanted children to fill their lives with joy. Marietta saw the look on his face as he was holding Spirit Tree Owl and knew that he was ready for a family.
When they walked up to where Spirit Crow and little Feather were standing, Spirit Tree Owl got down and went to his mother and said, " Me like Jake and Mariwetta here !! " Then put his little hand over his heart !! When Jake and Marietta heard that they knew it would be a great time to start a family. Jake told them about the big deer he had caught, that they were planning a big feast at Wileys and Melva's place. He also said they were inviting all the new people they had met plus their friends from the reservation. "It will take place real soon. We going to Chet and Maddies they can spread the word to all the people there. " Then Spirit Crow spoke, " Let us go tell out people about this. We've not been there in a long time. They'll love to get to see Spirit Tree Owl. " Jake said, " That will be just fine my friend, we do have lots to get ready for the feast. We will let you know when and I hope it's soon !! See you later !! " Then down the road they went. Chet was outside working on another table when they got there. He held out his hand to Jake then to Marietta and asked them to sit for a while. Just then Maddie came outside and was smiling when she saw them. "Welcome my friends, we've not seen you for a while now." Then Jake told them why they had stopped by and they would be delighted if all these people would come for the feast, and he would let them know when. It was staring to get dark out early so they said their goodbyes and headed back up the path.
Jake was so happy he couldn't help but to take Marietta in his arms and kiss her, to let her know how much she meant to him. " I love you Marietta with all my heart. I never had this much love in my life before and it really feels right. I will try my best to make you happy for the rest of our days. Hoping that soon there will be little ones in our home. " Marietta never cried much but this really touched her heart, she took his face in her hands and said," Jake Peters you're the best thing that's ever happened to me. I will always be your loving wife and yes, we will have little ones in our home, soon !! I'm not sure but I think I might be with child Jake !! I need to talk to my Maw about this tonight. " Jake was speechless!! But the big grin on his face said all she needed to know !! They walked up path to her parents house and they were sitting outside on the porch. Marietta said, " I need to talk to you about something Maw, in private please." A surprised look come across her Maw's face but she didn't speak until they were behind closed doors. " How can I know if I'm with child Maw? I have some morning sickness but not really bad." "Let me look at your face
Marietta, lets see what that tells me. " She looked at her daughter really close, not like she ever had before. Her face was full of love, her eyes sparkled like never before. " My dear Marietta, you are surely with child I should have seen the signs before now ! " She hugged her daughter for the first time since she was a little girl. It felt so good to Marietta she didn't want to let go. They both stepped out on the porch, but not a word had to be spoken because Jake knew she was with child when he saw her face beaming with joy !!
TO BE CONTINUED.....WRITTEN BY : BARBARA J. BRIGGS.....7/14/09


Comments: 64
Well everyone, finally the Spirit spoke to me and here is your long awaited story. I do hope y'all like it as much as I did. When I read it tears came rolling down my face.
Hugs n Love, Barbie
thanks for sharing you story. very nice..
You tell your stories with such sensitivity and love, Barbie. Thank you for sharing this lovely episode.
Well, no tears... but I love your people. Wish I could be at that feast.
You are very welcome my dear friend Larry, and thank you for commenting !!
Hi John, thank you for saying these nice things about my story telling. I really appreciate this so much.
Hugs for the both of you guys !! Barbie
Well hello Chuck, you snuck right in there on me !! I'm so glad you love my people, thank you so much for commenting. That would be a great thing to have you at the feast my friend !!
Hugs, Barbie
I agree with John. A touching and beautiful chapter.
I second that Marge....This was such a wonderful chapter to follow the ones before it. Barbie you do tell a great story!
Hey Marge, thank you so much dear lady for your lovely comment !!
And Stephanie, thank you very much for your nice words about my story!!
Hugs for you both, Barbie
Enchained in your world! Vivid clarity and compassion marks your words.
hug the memories
wonderful. I always enjoy your stories.
Kushal Poddar, I thank you so much young man for this great comment on my story.
Tammy B., I'm so glad you've enjoyed my stories, thank you young lady.
Hugs for you both, Barbie
Well done. I really like the use of the vernacular through out. It gives it a real world flavor rather than a author telling a story
Why, thank you so much John for the 'well done' I really appreciated that. Glad you liked how I write my stories. They actually come from the Spirit of my Creator, without that there wouldn't be any stories my dear friend.
Hugs, Barbie
Thanks barbara. My fix for the day :) These are educational. Give me a feel for their lives I never had before.
Wouldn't it be great if all our electronics suddenly disappeard and we had to find joy in being with people again ??? Hmmmm ... you never know. With today's technology there is a bad side and a good side. They say the 'enemy?' knows how to get into our electric grids. Maybe we will be without electronics some day. The only problem, there are not many wild animals and family gardens to sustain us.
Loved the story.
I'm glad the Spirit finally spoke to you! I enjoy reading your stories!
Wonderfully done, again!
Barbie, you do your writtings with such a heart, and it comes through. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Glome, you have me thinking now...but there surely are plenty animals to feed us and plenty seed to plant and grow vegetables too !! Who knows what tomorrow brings??
Bridget, I'm very glad to young lady..it has been a long time coming..so glad you enjoy reading my stories. Thank you my dear friend.
Margieanne, I write what the Spirit wants me to..I odn't know what I've written until I read the what I publish. I stand amazed for the most part !! There shall be more !!
Hugs to y'all, Barbie
How lovely. I really enjoy the little details too.
Gosh I missed your stories, glad he spoke to you.
Thank you Sheila for this great comment I really appreciate this.
Hi Renee dear lady, nice to know you missed my stories. I'm glad the Spirit spoke too !!
Hugs for you both, Barbie
Awesome job Barbara. You're getting better and better. Hope to see this published in the near future.
Blessings
Jay Miller
Inspirational Writer of Children Literature
All God's Critters Series
http://www.mybingobooks.com
http://www.allgodscrittersseries.blogspot.com/
Oooh my goodness Jay, thank you so much for the inspiring comment my dear friend. I'm still trying to get one of my daughters to make a CD for to take to the publisher. He's been waiting for quite some time now.
Blessings to you and yours Jay
Hugs, Barbie
well spun tale
:) wishing you laughter
Thanks for commenting Quinn, I appreciate this.
Hugs, Barbie
I can see you certainly enjoyed writing this chapter. From the onset there is action and then quite a nice and just right detail of the uses for the deer. (Bambi???)
Then you go from the innocence of a child into a romance. Excellent transition. I enjoyed the story and I also enjoy how well written this is with your own unstrained natural voice.
William, thank you so much my dear friend for this great comment. But without the help of the Spirit I wouldn't have been able to write this. (Bambi?) *smiles*
Hugs, Barbie
I love this chapter Barbie, it tells so much detail of how they dressed the meat, got the hides for their needs and kept meat fresh until they could use it. I also love the way all your romances go, softly and gently, and now another birth, your spirit is a good one Barbie, love, Elsie
I just loved your comment Elsie my dear friend !! And yes, the Spirit is a good one that helps me to write these stories. Thank you so much. *smiles*
Hugs n Love, Barbie
Hi Barbara, so glad to see you back writing: things have not been good for you lately, but I hope writing is proving good therapy for you. Again, I can't help but re-emphasize the uncanny attention to detail, and insights into the way of life of your characters. Stay strong, Barbara. Carl.
Hi Carl, I write when the spirit speaks to me dear friend. It is good for me Carl. I'm keeping my head above water Carl, it's very hard sometimes to overcome what life hands you. I will stay strong Carl, thank you dear man. *smiles*
Hugs n Love, Barbie
I am behind and catching up. the geat story you have written continues on.
Hi Terry, thank you for commenting I really appreciate that !!
Hugs, Barbie
This reminds me of some real folks down home. Sometimes, being with plain folks is all we need to get away from the trappings of the modern world. You wrote with such passion, the characters jump right out of the page. It felt aas if I was there. Hmm, makes me want to go check on my next long vacation from work. Way to go, GGB!
Why thank you for such a great comment my new friend M.N.Yano !! I do appreciate this so much. Yes I agree, being with plain folks is what we need sometimes.
Just Me, Barbie
wow, I have really missed alot of your stories, dont have time to catch up right now, but I will make myself a note to come back and read up... this piece is great!
Stopping by to see if you had a new one up yet. I don't get notifications anymore so I have been missing a lot of writing.
Just wanted you to know I'm thinking of you.
Thank you Marge my dear friend. I always try to spotlight my stories whrn I post them.
I want your to know I am thinking about you and you are coming along on your story so great.
I do hope you get it published.
Happy to see you and your characters back here on gather.com.
Congrats on your characters pregnancy! That was very sweet.
Terry my friend, thank you very much !! I'm glad to be back !!
Shannon, thank you young lady for commenting, I thought it would be an exciting thing to put in my story.
Hugs for y'all, Barbie
Julie my dear friend, thank you so much for the excellent comment !!
Randall dear young man, thank you so much oft the 'oh wow' and for the very good !!
Hugs to all !!, Barbie
Hugs, Barbie
I thought the very same thing Carol, about if the world was like my stories.
But it certainly isn't that way at all. Gave you goose bumps. *smiles*
Hugs, Barbie