June 10, 2009 10:58 PM EDT
(Updated: June 10, 2009 11:13 PM EDT)

Sweet raspberry creme dreams
Selene's tantalizing lips
Sugar coat kiss bliss
© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Jennifer Lee
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Comments: 38
The photo enhances your vibrant words!
Thanks, Kimberly!
I really like it, what form of haiku did you use?
I intended to use the traditional form 5-7-5, but because I'm dyslexic when I type, I messed it up. I had to change the last two lines around. Thanks, Sandra!
I had thought that was what happened, join the club, I do it alot.
Thanks Jennifer I love thee pic!
Thank you, Norene! :))
It is good all the same. Great pic for the Haiku. We will let ya slide with this one because it is so intimate!
I edited the problem. Thanks, David!
The picture and the poem really compliment each other.
Thank you, Shelbia.
I like it alot and i think she will too.
Thank you, James!
Ah, exquisite
Broken in two times
Thank you very much, Ku!
Tasty!!
Thanks, Magda! I appreciate your comment.
What a lovely way to honor our Raspberry Girl...makes me hungry....
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Thank you, my friend. You better have breakfast then. Maybe some cereal or pancakes with raspberries?!
=D does this mean we're engaged? =D
Seriously~what a delicious morning sensation for the mind~you honor me with your kisses ~ thank you for thinking of me~
Yes and no. It means that I want a test drive before we walk down the aisle. :))
You're welcome. This poem burned inside of me all day yesterday after reading about your book give away though I know it didn't address your prompt.
oh, but it certainly addressed my CENSORED =O*who keeps doing that* ;)
Not I....lol
. . . .and thank you for posting to GutterGirls~
Thank you for writing the book!
Anything red raspberries I love. Nice tribute to Selene, Jennifer.
I love them as well. Thank you so much, Barbary. It's always wonderful to hear from you. I'm not doing very well with my gather vacation. I just can't stop writing for a minute.
Great tribute to the desee de la lune Jennifer. Sugar coat kiss bliss Hmmmmmmmm.
Thanks, Chana!
Jennifer ~ This is a perfect "11" RASBERRY~Style Snippet!
Very short and to the point ~ L O L.
Thank you for sharing this well written Snippet with us.
The Snippets Crew
I just found your comment now. I'm sorry that I missed it. Thank you, Rene!
like this
Thank you, Lora!
Does Selene receive more tributes than anyone else? Seems that way. (Not complaining) This is beautiful.
Sweet verse, but not quite a Haiku.
looks yummy
reads delicious