Staring out the window of the floating orb, Mariah turned an indignant face to her captor,
"You cretin, the very least you could have done was to put me in a room with a decent view. Who wants to stare at the Goddamned Milky Way? It's just so... so... insanely boring. I have to insist you turn the ship so that I may view Andromeda instead."
The vista out the ship's window would have been an amazing vision to behold for the normal person, but Mariah Sanziban was not a normal person, by any means. Extraordinary didn't even begin to describe it.
Her captor laughed, although through his malignant, mutant visage, it was hard to tell.
"You think you are here to give orders? Let me tell you something, Little Miss shit-don't-stink. This is MY ship, and we do things MY way. Unless you want to get to Omega Seven in pieces, shut the hell up. Remember sweet cheeks, you don't mean squat to me. I can take them a little chunk of you and they will be happy as can be. If I were you, I would savor every second you remain in one piece. It doesn't matter to me either way."
"Argghhh!" Mariah screamed, and turned away from the sight of him.
Mariah had been raised in seclusion and splendor by the Brethren, a secret order of scientists and archeologists. She was one of a kind; an Enigma.
Her parents had relinquished her care to the Order at birth, as they could not keep her safe. The members of the Order thought it best to refrain from telling her that her own parents couldn't stand the sight of her.
To say she was spoiled was an understatement. The members of the Order catered to her every whim, every desire, with the exception of allowing her to attend any type of public gathering. They knew she must be shielded at all costs. Some even thought her to be a goddess; though she was not.
Remembering the night she was taken almost a year ago, Mariah felt a twinge of regret for never thanking the Order brethren for the tender loving care they surrounded her with for all of her nineteen years. Now, there was no one left to thank.
Her captor had insinuated that the conclusion of their journey was at hand, and she was more intrigued than frightened. The Order had taught her that there were other worlds than her own, and each brought wonder and enlightenment in varying degrees. She was not afraid to go to the next world, as it had to be more fun than the one she was currently ensconced in.
Leading Mariah from the ship, she and her captor were greeted by a throng of alien beings, each more horrific than the last. She would be glad to be rid of them.
A huge rather reptilian creature greeted her captor warmly, speaking in some foreign tongue which sounded to Mariah like "ahs wojf smechals vofnaf."
"Um, will one of you please tell me what's going on? And speak English, that gobbledygook you're spewing is just rude!" Mariah exclaimed.
"Oh, I see what you mean, Garf. She IS a feisty one." the apparent leader of the group said to her captor. "I'm very sorry Miss Sanziban, I am Phlent, Grand Captain of Omega Seven. Please, let me lead you to your accommodations."
With that, he offered Mariah his scaly arm, much like the knights of the realm she had read about in her childhood.
Entering the huge suite of rooms, Mariah was taken aback by their beauty. The furniture and bed were adorned in a gauzy film in colors she had never imagined. She was in awe of the splendor, and considering her opulent upbringing, this was nothing short of wondrous.
Mariah felt more at ease than she had in the months which brought her to this place. She was beginning to think this place wouldn't be so bad after all.
"Are the rooms to your liking?" Phlent inquired.
"Yes, they are lovely, thank you." Mariah replied.
Now, will one of you please tell me why I have been scuttled about all over the galaxy?"
Phlent shot a quizzative look toward Garf. "What, you didn't tell her?" he asked incredulously.
"Oh my dear. You are the first human to be born in a thousand years without some type of mutation. I thought you knew that. You are truly one-of-a-kind. We are extremely pleased you survived the journey." Phlent said with a chuckle.
"We were once human ourselves, but the radiation and lack of ozone on Earth took its toll over the years. We had planned to use your DNA to find a way to "normalize" the population. Something we thought would take a course of decades, but now we have you whole and fertile. You my sweet, are here to propagate the species. The testing will begin tomorrow to determine which of us will be the most suitable mate. It is somewhat of a competition, and all the males are extremely excited. I'm rather excited myself."
Mariah spun about and looked at him with ever widening eyes.
"You mean to tell me that I was brought zillions of miles to be some alligator's Goddamned Whore? Oh, Hell no! Not gonna happen buddy. Not now, not ever." She screamed at him.
"Mariah, relax. Not whore, but Mother. You will be revered in a way you were not on your home planet.
The only drawback will be living pregnant. You will be impregnated every year until you are no longer capable of producing offspring."
"You expect me to....ugh! I thought you were.. advanced. Whatever happened to artificial insemination?" She exclaimed, wandering aimlessly about the room, looking for an escape.
"Artificial insemination and cloning are parts of the reason we look like this today, Mariah. It is time to get back to the basics. You see, our females have mutated in such a way that while they can carry a fetus, they cannot mate. In other words, their vaginal openings have atrophied, while the males of the species have, lets say, been enhanced." Phlent stated proudly. Much too proudly.
Mariah thought about the implications Phlent had spelled out for her. Here she was, a zillion miles away from home, On a planet populated by a variety of mutated humans, and expected to mate with one, if not many of them.
Turning to face her captors, Mariah stood staunchly. " Revered, huh? Enhanced, eh? Hmmm, do you by some chance have a little thing called a paper bag? "
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Comments: 56
LOL - An alligator's whore? That's something to aspire to! (Isn't Florida Rep. Posey supposed to be part gator according to Stephen Colbert?)
Well done, Donna. But it would take more than a paper bag to get me in that girl's shoes!
EM,
Hey, I just go where my warped little mind takes me..lol Yes, I think Posey does have a gene or two in common with a gator, at least according to Stephen.
You are so wonderfully crazeeeeeeeeeeee! Only you could make boinking a disgusting creature hilarious!!!!!!! What a socioevolutionary statement layered with funnies~
You so rock GilfFriend!
Purr,
I am so very pleased you liked it. Yep, I've never been what one would call "normal"..lol
Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~
what a lovely romp
this is what I call scifi!
Wow. That is high praise, coming from you. Sincere thanks.
You have a very vivid imagination!
vivid imagination to some, certifiable to others...lol
Very good thanks for posting
Ouch, just the thought of the scaly enhancements hurts.
By the way, I forgot to say, you did a wonderful job on this. I laughed, I cried, I puked.
sharon,
not exactly the response I was hoping ofr, but what the hell, I'll take it! Thanks!!!
spelling error. "barring"
sorry, i went back again to read it. i think you mean barely allowing her?
you talked about the milky way, but put them on an unknown planet. perhaps if you mention how the one creature got frustrated and hit warp speed to get them there faster it would help break you out of our galaxy more believably.
outside of that, i thought it was kinda funny and a good job.
I said she could see the milky way, and it bored her, not that they were a part of it.
I meant "barring", but you made me realize it reads rather wonky, so I edited. Thank you.
I usually don't like sci-fi too much but, this story made me laugh out loud!!
And, made me wish to read more.
Tell me a second part is coming. Pretty please!!!
We'll see, Angela. Going out of town till Tues. ..it will ahve to wait, if I do.
This is an interesting concept, worthy of an old Twilight Zone episode, good one!
do-do-do-do...(twilight zone theme)
Always hooked up with Rod Serling on a Tueday night!
We have been watching the remakes from '85 on theChiller Channel. It is a hoot to see some of the up and coming actors..like Bruce Willis pre-Moonlighting, and others. Wes Craven directed a bunch of them, and The Grateful Dead did the theme song.
I go back to the B&W episodes of about 1965! Wm. Shatner, and Charles Bronson, Inger stevens (who killed herself soon after) Buddy Ebsen, everyone seemed to get a break in those shows back then.
There was a guitar guy who did a version of the theme song too, either someone like Duane Eddy or Dick Dale and the Deltones!
I watch thosewhenever the SCi fi channel does a marathon, Georgiana. I think I could probably recite "Time Enough to Last"...with Burgess Merideth. I thik that is my all time favorite episode.
and I think too...lol
God damn! Yes! I always wished he could have had another pair of glasses!
The thought police have reached your story!
When will they ever learn?
They are following us around Gather!
I wish I had a fan club, like you do...lol
Careful what you wish for!
(actually, Rick L. has been organising a web site for me, his own idea, it is strange, but I have a fan club attached!! LOL
www.georgiegirlrocks.com
It isn't up and running yet, but some of the stuff is a hoot!
Or mebbe Outer Limits. As a SciFi buff for 50+ years, I liked this.
Do not adjust your set.
Thanks Georiana. I appreciate it.
Chuck...I am honored. I'm a SCi-fi nut myself, but this is the first time I have attempted to write it.
This was very interesting Donna.. Very imaginative and comical to boot. I gave it a 10, however, what's up with the "Goddammed?" It didn't quite fit in there or seem to serve any purpose? Maybe I missed it? Didn't care for that expression but that's just me.. lol..
If it is part of the character's veracular, then it fit just fine, Sandy. Are we the dialog police now? I apologize if offended you, but since I did not write it with you in mind, I would say it is your issue, not mine. I think you have read enough of my fiction to know at the onset that there will be swearing.
No offense was taken by reading it donna... why so touchy? "Dialog police?" lol.. please... I was merely stating an opinion, and a positve one at that. I also ask you a simple question, which you answered and I thank you. Why make an issue of it? lol.. gezzzzzzzzz
Sandy,
I merely responded to your comment with my own. Whom is being touchy?When someone critiques my work, the least I can do is provide an explanation for why I wrote a particular phrase. The character is a spoiled brat who thinks of nothing but herself, and the use of the term is quite appropriate. To come in and state that a phrase which I penned "does not fit" is tantamount to saying you know my character better than I. I do not consider that a " positive one at that".
If you wish to critique my grammar, punctuation or any other aspect of my posts, feel free, as it is appreciated, but do not even think about critiquing my choice of language for a character. I write what the character's personality tells me to write.
Good for you Donna!
Just speaking my mind, nothing more, nothing less..lol
their vaginal openings have atrophied,
Sounds like menopause to me.. hahah
You're a hoot, Donna!
Debra,
Not if you practice a lot..
sounds more like exercise to me, donna. hahah.
I practiced a lot for years!
Then you ain't doin' it right, Debra...lol You know what they say..."Practice makes perfect"
yeah, I know. I could make him do all the work. HA
What? There's another way??
Mother Goddess! I pictured her becoming like a Surinam Toad.
Disturbingly funny and now posted at The Surreal Circus.
Adrian,
Maybe the kids, but not Mariah...lol
Poor spoiled baby. Sometimes we get what ask for. Lol. Good one.
Ain't it the truth...lol
What an interesting story you have written in just a few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Lee,
Thank you for reading, and for thinking I have talent. You have no idea how I appreciate those words.
Well, I'm back from the wilds of New York and this was the first thing I read :) I missed the prompt ... was busy baking out my brain in a big field, then freezing it (it was VERY cold at night). Fun story. A rather morbid take on science and reproduction! Eeep! And the thought of "mating" with something like that. Urg. Almost makes me feel sorry for the little brat. Almost.
Wish we had this many comments on the Launa/Dixie stuff! Perhaps we should post it to some other groups?
Barb,
I just got home a couple hours ago, myself...I'm sunburned myself. Glad you liked this, and yes, I've been thinking aobut posting our stuff elsewhere as well. I'm going to go get a much needed shower, and we can talk in the AM...I'm too pooped to participate tonight..lol
Oh, I went to bed at 9pm last night! I'm at work, but I wouldn't say I'm awake!
I feel halfway human myself today, when I can ignore the screaming sunburn...
thanks
welcome