This is part two of a Tuesday WE collaborative effort of myself and Barb Carlson. In the previous installment, Dixie arrived at her Uncle's farm house, just in time to see a bear trying to climb in the backseat of Tia's car, where an injured Launa lay. If you missed part one of this tale, please go back and read it HERE. ( I have used Barb's last post as the link, as mine was split into two posts, so this is easier to navigate)Both Barb and I have index' to our tales of Launa and Dixie, so if you have missed the back story of either, please go check them out.
Tia came back wearing a faded blue robe two sizes too big, and a pair of baggy jeans, rolled up at the cuff. She was carrying her own wet clothes. "Dixie, do you know if they have a washer or a dryer here? I need to wash my clothes." She pulled the robe tighter around her. "I was hoping there might be a hot water heater, too. There's water, but definitely no hot water. A hot bath would be really nice."
Dixie chuckled at the sight of the petite woman dressed in her Aunt's old robe, and obviously a pair of Uncle David's jeans. The scene would have ordinarily brought a sarcastic remark to Dixie's lips, but seeing how frightened Tia remained, and how utterly exhausted she looked, she stilled her tongue.
"I think the water heater is in the mud room behind the kitchen, and unless they upgraded in the past few years, the washer is an old wringer washer. Aunt Deb always hung the laundry out back on the line. Tell ya what, kiddo, give me your clothes, and I'll deal with them, and see if I can get the water heater lit. Why don't you curl up on the couch, have some of those yummy peaches, and chill out for a little while. No offense, darlin', but you look like you could drop where you stand."
Dixie took the clothes and headed to the back of the house. She was relieved to find a fully operational set of Maytags in the mudroom, as well as an electric water heater. "Hot Damn!" she exclaimed as she pushed the "on" switch of the water heater and heard it sputter to life.
Throwing Tia's clothing, as well as her own muddy slacks into the washer, Dixie realized there was no laundry detergent to be found anywhere. Returning to the parlor, Tia watched, puzzled, as Dixie pulled a few small boxes from her medical supplies and returned to the mud room.
Emerging a few minutes later, clad in only a shirt and panties, Dixie grinned, " It's going to take the water about an hour to heat up, and I kind of had to improvise on the laundry soap. I'll bet this is the first time either of us had our laundry washed in soap suds enema solution. Now, why don't you tell me what happened with your friend, and how you ended up here?"
"What?!" Tia's eyes widened in surprise. "You're washing our clothes in .. an enema? Ewwwww...." She started laughing, and continuing laughing until she had to set the jar of peaches on the table or risk dropping them. She sat down at the kitchen table, still laughing, and suddenly her laughter turned into sobs. She put her head down on her arms and cried just as hard as she'd been laughing.
Dixie rounded the table, and wrapped her arms around Tia, "Its ok, baby, let it out, let it all out."
Finally cried out, Tia lifted her head and wiped her eyes with the arm of the robe. "I'm sorry," she said. "It's just been ... a really hard day." She hiccoughed a few times and sighed deeply. She started eating the sweet, sticky peaches. "These are better than the ones in the can," she said.
"Yeah, Aunt Deb had a knack with canning. Her peaches won first prize at the county fair for years, as well as her strawberry preserves. Remind me to dig for some of that later. Why don't you just tell me what happened?" Dixie urged.
Tia finished a peach, and took a deep breath. "Well," she said, "it's really hard to believe, but today -- heck the last whole week or so -- has been insane." She wrapped her arms around herself tightly. "Today, I was visiting Launa in the hospital, and she had some vision or something. I didn't really believe her until I saw the guard was gone."
" A guard? Um, what did she do to need guarding? Let's start with that, and get to the whole "vision thing" later."
"Well," Tia continued, "The police had a guard outside the door because the gang members tried to kill Launa." She sighed in frustration. "I know I'm not making much sense." She shifted a little in her seat. "Some gang was robbing stores, and they came in to rob our store. Problem is, they were killing people. Launa saved me but got shot and the police came and shot the guy."
"Wait a minute, I didn't see any gunshot wound when I was cleaning her up. I stitched up an obvious stab wound. She was in the hospital because she got shot?" Dixie looked puzzled.
"No, not this time."
"This time? How many times has this gal been in the hospital?" Dixie asked, suddenly wondering what she had gotten herself into.
"Well, she was there for a few days and was getting better, but she saw a gang member trying to get in to see her, so she left early." Tia sipped some peach juice. "She was staying at my house, but ... but ..." Tears began to run down her face again. She paused and started again, "But here my brother told the gang and he kidnapped her and took her to them and they ... they raped her and beat her something awful and even stabbed her," she finished in a rush. She started sobbing again and said, "I can't believe my brother did that. He said he didn't know they would try to kill her. He said ..." Tia put her head down and started sobbing again.
"Oh, honey. It has been a rough week for you, not to mention poor Launa. I wondered how she got the bruises. I figured it had something to do with a man, just not like that. Now, now, you're safe for the time being." Dixie said with a tired smile.
Tia yawned. "I'm really tired. I think I better to go sleep. I feel all loopy." She looked up at Dixie, "Oh, but I don't want to stick you with the laundry. I'm sure you're tired, too."
"Yeah, I'm pretty wiped out myself. OK, kid, you can tell me how you ended up here in the morning. There are two bedrooms upstairs, take your pick. I think I'll just throw the clothes in the dryer, and sack out on the couch. That way, I can hear Launa should she wake up. The last thing she needs is to wake up in a strange place, freak out and pop a stitch."
Dixie watched as Tia made her way slowly up the stairs. As exhausted as she was, she couldn't help but wonder if fate had brought them all together here. As she drifted off to sleep, her mind turned to Tia's recounting of the events that led them here. "Visions...gonna have to ask about that one"
Here is a link to Barb's post of this ongoing saga. Her intro is different, so be a sweetie and go read: Launa Collaboration #2


Comments: 11
There are some really great nuances and twists.
Looking forward to hearing more.
This one is even more "seamless" than the last one... Both of your voices harmonize well together and I have no idea which parts were written by who.
Thank you Kathleen. It seems we do have a rhythm going, doesn't it? Look for part 3 today.
donna, was wondering how Tia was going to explain this one. Who'd believe? And, how do you tell it all, without it sounded like you might need a mental ward yourself? The flow was natural, like someone telling the very first time. Excellent work although, I'm with Tia, I'd need a bit more explanation on how an enema would CLEAN clothes. lol (I've figured it out, although I won't be so trusting the next time some doctor wants me to "drink this" or "squirt this...." lol)
I also liked the little scene setters - like whose robe and whose pant, and the peaches to set into mind Dixie's relatives, and thus a little bit about Dixie. Now I know relatives can be as far away from who we are as possible, however, they are tiny links to a person's past.
Now, one problem I have this time - and blame it on me being married to someone, who knows plumbing, as well as someone, who was in the first group of people to use a summer cottage once. (I doubt many would pick this up, so probably not that important.) That load of clothes is washing in rusty, muddy, thick water. The plumbing hasn't been used in 2-3 years, so the pipes have been perfectly settled in - half water, and half rust/mud. (Add to that, Tia and my image in our brains on what enemas are, and I'm not touching what comes out - ever. lol) I sure hope the second rinse clears out what the first wash brought in. Or, I hope the two ladies used the toilet enough to wash out some of what was coming in. (Bizarre crap lives in my brain, huh? lol)
That part is extremely minor. Just reminded me of times I'm glad I didn't put on a load of laudry or take a shower, first. All told, this is excellently written. It is very much as if you two had a mind meld.
Lynn,
It hadn't been explained as yet, but there IS a caretaker of the property. As for the enema, a "SSE" , or soap suds enema is nothing but castile soap and water. It is a very gentle soap. You can buy bars of castile soap, or make it yourself. It is olivew oil based.
Castile soap can be combined with washing soda and Borax to make an excellent laundry detergent, too. I prefer it to the Tide now! It's incredibly cheap, too.
Copy of comment left over at Barb's posting of your posting
"and back again ~ how in the world did you come up with washing in an enema wash? ROLFMBO ~ now THAT is creativity.
In this line: "She paused and started again, "But here my brother told the gang and he kidnapped her and took her to them and they...." did you mean "but here"? or but "then"?
Barb, the story line again is fantastic, and you've caught the essence of southern talk very well with Dixie (Donna) ~ I'm impressed again, and I didn't see or notice the POV change either ~ sometimes I think that's natural in writing, to keep a story line going in the right direction.
**all the above is addressed to Donna** sorry for my confusion, but being confused is a natural way of living for me ~~ j
Jean,
Thank you. I had no problem understanding your comment, as I think we live in a shared state of confusion..
that line about the enema wash had me rolling!!! tooo funny! this is good work girls, I cant even tell the differences really
Thanks, barb. I think Barb and I really have an insight into each others' characters, and it shows.