Dark Thoughts

This one time

my love to share

to ask for more

I do not dare

Fate has left

Me here alone

Facing the pain

So on I drone

To live pretending

Life with ease

When you entered my life

It was just a tease

To let me know

How things could be

If you had only

First met me

I cannot cry

The tears are gone

I just dry my eyes

For I must move on

Life decided

You are not for me

And feelings like that

Aren't meant to be

So I will go back

Into my dark shell

Dreaming of love

While living in Hell.

Comments: 33

Lee P. May 12, 2009, 4:05am EDT

Awwww, how sad. Forgetabouthim!!!!

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Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate May 12, 2009, 4:57am EDT

nice poem Lisa.........

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JOHN BECK May 12, 2009, 6:10am EDT

Oh, my. Not fuzzy feelings! Well written verse, Lisa.

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fancy c. May 12, 2009, 6:37am EDT

very nice

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Danielle P. May 12, 2009, 6:58am EDT

I'm so sorry. You are a beautiful, smart, talented woman. You know in your heart God has has someone better in store for you!!

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Svetlana Goryacheva May 12, 2009, 7:31am EDT

I know that this feeling of sadness and loss will be ultimately conquered... after all, the source of our happiness lays inside ourselves, not outside. Well done, dear Lisa!

Blessings and best wishes in a plenty - S.

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Chris E. May 12, 2009, 7:32am EDT

That is sad Lisa.

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Kushal Poddar May 12, 2009, 7:41am EDT

At first
I was taken aback;
how does my Lisa F
be amid sadness!
It is a touching poetry and also makes me alert.

to a Gray wolf

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Brian T. May 12, 2009, 7:42am EDT

good write Lisa- my best wishes

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Charity M. May 12, 2009, 7:58am EDT

((( As dark as it is...your heart's still beating...still and you will hear how perfect a heart can be...)))

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♠~Dnbuster~♠ ~. May 12, 2009, 8:20am EDT

well written Lisa

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penni d. May 12, 2009, 8:32am EDT

That last stanza fits more than the poem intended, methinks,Lisa...Kudos, woman!

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. May 12, 2009, 8:43am EDT

stirring and emotive~

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. May 12, 2009, 8:43am EDT

Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~

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Lisa Frost May 12, 2009, 8:49am EDT

Thank you all for your caring and supportive comments! I am writing from emotions but it isn't now. I am doing well!

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j - Frugal Mom - r. May 12, 2009, 8:54am EDT

It is really sad Lisa. I am glad that you are doing well now though.

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Kimber L. May 12, 2009, 9:01am EDT

I am glad you posted the comment to say you are doing well. Isn't writing a wonderful way to vent/rid ourselves of the emotions we no longer need/carry?

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Spencer T. May 12, 2009, 9:09am EDT

Truly a dark rendition of how life can kick us when we don't need it. Hang in there.

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Jennifer Lee May 12, 2009, 9:34am EDT

It has all been said, thank you for posting to our group. Glad you are doing well.

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~*Jackie Ferrari*~ May 12, 2009, 9:40am EDT

I love this emotion filled poem, Lisa.

I am glad to know that was in the past.

Youre way too dear and tender to hurt.
J

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Stacey *Mamasaid* D. May 12, 2009, 10:11am EDT

Lisa, how sad, emotional and touching. ((hugs))

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Kelly Kay May 12, 2009, 10:14am EDT

When we acknowledge a bad situation, the next step is to move on and heal, leaving him in your dust!

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Pamela O. May 12, 2009, 11:16am EDT

{{{HUGS}}} I can feel the pain in this.

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' May 12, 2009, 2:21pm EDT

why to go in dark for the one who is not caring about you...Live in light and spread light..

Beautiful as usual,Lisa

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Priscilla P. May 12, 2009, 7:11pm EDT

OH NO what happened. I have been gone for 2 months and I fear I missed out.

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Howard b. May 12, 2009, 8:03pm EDT

Lisa , You will find another. I'm not kidding. It just takes time . Something we all have. Time just passes slow when you're alone. Get out of the dark. Put on a smile . You might be surprised what you might find.lol. I hope you have a good night.

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Georgiana S. May 13, 2009, 12:42am EDT

It will most likely be a blessing in about 6 months! my husband walked out and my pride wanted him to not stray, then I found how much better I was without him!

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