by norene t.
Member since:
October 31, 2006

Sometimes...

May 06, 2009 08:22 AM EDT
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When I think of you with your raven hair

I speak to you and your not there

Would you listen or give a care?

Sometimes?



Clandestine ideas I love to share

I shout them out to the open air

Can you hear me in your Lair?

Sometimes? 



 Intimate thoughts, My soul I bare

A haunting glance, a wayward stare

I really wish that you were here

Sometimes!



So come to me if you dare

I will listen this time to your dispare

Heaven must have an open window there?

Sometimes.











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Comments: 7

norene t. May 6, 2009, 8:23am EDT
I think I spelled dispare wrong?
Dana W. May 6, 2009, 8:43am EDT
very wonderful writing thank you
A Parameswaran N. May 6, 2009, 10:03am EDT
nice!
pls edit 2 clear bold
C.L. R. May 6, 2009, 12:02pm EDT
well done
norene t. May 6, 2009, 1:35pm EDT
whats pls edit 2 clear bold?
norene t. May 6, 2009, 1:35pm EDT
Thank you!
DIANE D. May 18, 2009, 12:44pm EDT
A great job~

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