by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

What it is....

May 05, 2009 03:43 PM EDT
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From the endless pit that is my heart,

I seen a light that peaked this curiosity,

Unable to remove my eyes from which I see,

Your beauty fills my vision for thats what it is.

 

From you my every muscle wishes to escape,

For something this amazing could never be true,

Yet my mind has me firmly staked to the ground,

Wondering how you could be possible and what it is.

 

Your stare drains every fear in my being with ease,

Trembling with unsure pleasure I try to calmly breath,

Needing you begining to fill my veins, my thoughts, my soul.

For your presence has filled me with love and shown me what it is.

 

 

Nation

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Comments: 31

Beth G. May 5, 2009, 3:52pm EDT
This was beautiful Nation, and I particularly liked the last line!
TINA s. May 5, 2009, 3:54pm EDT
very nice
Rebecca [Future Teacher] May 5, 2009, 4:08pm EDT
Beautiful poem Nation
Jonbonjovious M. May 5, 2009, 4:14pm EDT
love it. Very well done.
Jamie Kiser May 5, 2009, 4:25pm EDT
nice
fancy c. May 5, 2009, 4:59pm EDT
10
Janie E. May 5, 2009, 5:12pm EDT
Sweet poem, Nation!!
Paula C. May 5, 2009, 5:25pm EDT
great poem
Desiree T. May 5, 2009, 7:23pm EDT
eloquently touching!
now this is that prismatic tone of love human beings are rarely open enough to see let alone be able to give~you've described unconditional love from its purest spiritual perspective beautifully~
Larry H. May 5, 2009, 8:37pm EDT
thanks for sharing...
Jennifer H. May 5, 2009, 8:40pm EDT
Fantastic! Loved it<3
Kimber L. May 5, 2009, 8:45pm EDT
I like this one a lot Nation
Amber C. May 5, 2009, 8:48pm EDT
I'm thinking you have a better grasp of your emotions than I.
Georgiana S. May 5, 2009, 10:28pm EDT
Lovely, especially for someone going through nicotine withdrawal!
debra g. May 6, 2009, 12:39am EDT
Beautiful is all I can say!!
Have a great gather day!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheryl W. May 6, 2009, 1:39pm EDT
Lovely poem, Nation...:)
Sharon C. May 6, 2009, 5:29pm EDT
Beautiful Poem

Stopping by from
Lisa Frost May 6, 2009, 9:26pm EDT
a lovely write!
Angela A. May 6, 2009, 11:49pm EDT
A very wonderful, heart warming poem!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Joann Nicole May 7, 2009, 6:01am EDT
Stopping by from

Have a great day!
Christine K. May 7, 2009, 8:49am EDT
A wonderful poem! Points Nation
Nancy S. May 7, 2009, 8:58am EDT
Developing trust can be very difficult. Lovely. Points nation.
Angela W. May 7, 2009, 1:12pm EDT
I've got a ton of posts to catch up on so excuse the generic comment. PN
Angie O. May 7, 2009, 11:07pm EDT
Love personified. Very nice.
Georgiana S. May 8, 2009, 12:37am EDT
nice 2nd time around too!
Stopping by from
Nora C. May 8, 2009, 7:52pm EDT
Beautiful
Marie L. May 10, 2009, 7:32pm EDT
Very nice!
kimberly g. May 22, 2009, 7:00am EDT

you write such greatness!
Ginger C. Jun 7, 2009, 2:18pm EDT

Wonderful poem Nation! Very heartfelt!

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