Once upon a time
I ran through grass as tall as me,
hiding there,
hoping nobody would find me.
The breeze would blow the grass,
and it would tickle me
as I crouched low,
hidden from the world.
I used to wonder if God
could still see me,
or was I hidden from His eyes too.
Sometimes the day was hot,
and I stayed there, burning in the sun...
praying for it to rain just a bit
so I could stick out my tongue
and get a taste of water.
I could hear him calling me,
and I trembled,
wishing mama would hurry home.
I didn't move a muscle
as I crouched there.
The mosquitos were fierce.
The more I slapped them,
the more they bit me.
Still, the bites were welcome
compared to what lay inside
waiting for me.
I used to dream I could disappear
or sprout wings and fly away,
bit I knew that would never happen.
For some reason,
I was where I was meant to be
for just a season...
and seasons always change.


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Blessings and best wishes - S.
"I could hear him calling me"
To whom does "him" refer?
Apparently it's not God (no cap). John Doyle said it right.
compared to what lay inside
waiting for me."
I read that as an abusive father. Am I the only one who saw it that way?
learning the thrilling sensations of nature
the strong scent of the predator
the sweet scent of life
I was where I was meant to be
for just a season...
and seasons always change."
This adds both an element of fate and a ray of hope to your sad, beautiful poem.
John...you read it correctly..
The nest
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Powerful piece indeed. It starts out so innocently. Then you weave a whole different tale of sadness.