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April 27, 2009 11:36 AM EDT

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The rain was falling hard onto the windshield of Sandras car, almost making it so she couldn't see the road in front of her.

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donna f. Apr 27, 2009, 11:47am EDT

"What a time for the windshield wipers to decide to conk out", she thought.

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Nellie (The Bad Santa of Gather) Apr 27, 2009, 12:17pm EDT

then suddenly a body walked out in front of her.

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donna f. Apr 27, 2009, 12:21pm EDT

Not just ANY body, an already dead body, from the looks of it.

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Dusty Hubbard Apr 27, 2009, 12:25pm EDT

She slammed on the breaks and quickly jumped out of the car.

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donna f. Apr 27, 2009, 12:40pm EDT

"Daddy? Daddy is it really you?"?

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Jessica S. Apr 28, 2009, 12:15am EDT

Suddenly, his eyes popped open, and she realized that it wasn't her father at all... it was a man who looked strikingly like him, but was much younger....

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