by queen.susan .

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November 10, 2006

Beckoning Mountain - haiku

April 26, 2009 02:07 AM EDT

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Beckoning Mountain - (c) Susan L.

Distant mountain top

Beckoning me to come climb;

Still I have no legs.

Tags: poem, haiku, mountain, distant, top, climb, legs, beckoning

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Comments: 7

Lawrence U. Apr 26, 2009, 2:16am EDT

Lovely piece, Susan! I like it!!

Shaunee C. Apr 26, 2009, 2:26am EDT

Well written

sandesh b. Apr 26, 2009, 2:54am EDT

nice

Robert D. Apr 26, 2009, 2:59am EDT

Nice haiku!

Lisa Frost Apr 26, 2009, 3:24am EDT

I was never very good with Haiku, but this is great!

Elaine S. Apr 26, 2009, 7:05am EDT

I Like it!

fancy c. Apr 26, 2009, 8:02am EDT

love it


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