by Donna Spirit
Member since:
March 6, 2006

Ecstasy: A Fifty Word Story

April 24, 2009 09:10 AM UTC (Updated: April 24, 2009 09:10 AM UTC)
views: 0 | comments: 31

"The choice is yours, my love." he whispered tenderly into her ear.

How she had longed to hear those words.

Years of self denial were now, in an instant, dissolved, as was her will power.

Her breath came in short rasps, excited, yet restrained.

"Hot fudge, caramel pecan sundae please"

 

50 words

 

I came across this in my articles this morning, from 2006, originally titled "Rapture". I thought it would be a fun re-post.

 

 

Comments: 31

Rebecca P. Apr 24, 2009, 9:12am UTC
Nice story, that does sound good
Barb Carlson Apr 24, 2009, 9:18am UTC
Yum .... I want one! :)
Fun, but now I'm hungry, damn you, lol.
Sharon B. Apr 24, 2009, 9:34am UTC
great
Nancy Biri Apr 24, 2009, 9:35am UTC
Nice
Lawrence U. Apr 24, 2009, 9:40am UTC
Lovely!
Ha Ha, foodie porn!
Jodi F. Apr 24, 2009, 9:55am UTC
that was great! I want one too
Donna Spirit Apr 24, 2009, 9:56am UTC
EM,
Exactly!
Pam G. Apr 24, 2009, 10:16am UTC
Extra caramel pleeease. : )
roger s. Apr 24, 2009, 12:16pm UTC
I want one , NOOOOOOWWW lol
Kathryn Flynn Apr 24, 2009, 12:41pm UTC
oh makin me hungry.............
Beth G. Apr 24, 2009, 1:46pm UTC
lol this is very cute Donna!
Sharon P. Apr 24, 2009, 1:55pm UTC
True temptation.
Leo Lemmer Apr 24, 2009, 3:54pm UTC
Ah, food. Linda Rondstat said, "A Snickers bar is better than sex."
'
Ian, the social being Apr 24, 2009, 5:20pm UTC
That sounds great... and an interesting challenge. To write a significant piece in 50 words. I might have to try that. You succeeded.
Angela A. Apr 24, 2009, 5:42pm UTC
Yep, ice cream does that to me too!
Donna Spirit Apr 24, 2009, 7:42pm UTC
Leo,
Well, I wouldn't go that far. And I've seen Linda recently, so I am not a bit surprised..lol

Ian,
When I joined Gather there was a few groups dedicated to 50 word challenges. Many had a theme, or a tag line to include
Erin O'Riordan Apr 24, 2009, 9:18pm UTC
I love it!
EDWINA (MISSIE) B. Apr 24, 2009, 9:48pm UTC
enjoyes it,thanks for sharing
Erica Hidvegi Apr 24, 2009, 10:01pm UTC
Oh that was wonderful . . . you expect the passionate kiss to kiss and its even sweeter--kiss to spoon with all that yummie going for it !
Jeanette Cheezum Apr 24, 2009, 11:19pm UTC
It's fun to go back and find our little treasures.

10 4 u
Georgiana S. Apr 25, 2009, 1:48am UTC
Clever! Where the mind at first goes!
Chuck Larlham Apr 25, 2009, 9:38am UTC
*Snerk*
Lyn Owen Apr 25, 2009, 9:49am UTC
He He He
Donna Spirit Apr 25, 2009, 10:41am UTC
Selene,
HA! I know better...lol
Rachel W. Apr 29, 2009, 2:26pm UTC
Awesome
Chas Andrews May 15, 2009, 5:20pm UTC
thanks

Join the Conversation
Chime in! Become a Gather member to comment.
Already a member? Sign in
top
 
Gather | Friends | Groups | Share
About Gather | Engagement Marketing | Gather Points | Advertise on Gather | Gather Press | Privacy | Terms of Service | Community Guidelines
Books | Business | Celebs | Entertainment | Family | Food | Giveaways | Health | Money | Moms | News | Politics | Sports | Style | Technology | Travel | Writing
Version 18247, "Zach"; Copyright © 2013 Gather Inc. All rights reserved.