by Becca J.
Member since:
December 5, 2008

"Still" - GCC

April 20, 2009 07:15 PM EDT
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"Still"

 

You're gone,

The way no longer matters.

Still

No matter what I tell myself,

You creep into my thoughts.

Still

No matter how I try,

I crave your gentle touch.

Still

My dreams are about you,

You plague my sleepless nights,

Still

Days, to weeks

Months, to years.

And still

You are with me

Still

I wonder did I say,

I love you?

 

by Becca Johnson 08/17/07

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Comments: 21

d2the4 .. Apr 20, 2009, 7:18pm EDT
well written verse.
Kim B. Apr 20, 2009, 7:26pm EDT
very nice
Marsha S. Apr 20, 2009, 7:30pm EDT
this is good
Leah Christensen Apr 20, 2009, 8:27pm EDT
Very very good.
Susan Roberts Apr 20, 2009, 10:02pm EDT
thank you for sharing
points nation
Renita P. Apr 20, 2009, 10:02pm EDT
very nicely written
Melanie B. Apr 20, 2009, 10:11pm EDT
Becca~ that is such a nice piece. great job~ I so know how you feel here~

~*Points Nation*~
mary bryant Apr 22, 2009, 9:18am EDT
very very nice
Points Nation
Ginger C. Apr 22, 2009, 10:52am EDT
Very lovely and heartfelt poem! I'm Surfing Gather, dropping by from Points Nation! ;-)
Sharon C. Apr 22, 2009, 2:10pm EDT
Beautiful!!!

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Nancy S. Apr 22, 2009, 10:32pm EDT
Well done. I like it. Points nation.
Janell R. Apr 23, 2009, 8:12pm EDT
Wonderful poem, Becca.
DIANE D. Apr 24, 2009, 8:19am EDT
Great poem, very well written.
Svetlana Goryacheva Apr 26, 2009, 3:16pm EDT
Very good one! :-)


Blessings and best wishes - S.
Elizabeth S. Apr 26, 2009, 6:55pm EDT
lots of truth in there

stopping by for Points Nation
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Apr 28, 2009, 1:46pm EDT
Catching up on Points Nation
Elizabeth B. May 2, 2009, 12:53pm EDT
that is a lovely piece!
pn
M & M. May 6, 2009, 4:04pm EDT
That was beautiful

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~Jamie W. May 11, 2009, 3:09am EDT
Very beautiful poem!

good writing Becca.........

thanks.....

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