In a chamber dark and scarce with light
a huddle backed man lives by candlelight
hunched far over a dark wooden table
with eyes aglow in casting a fable.
Stone and wood, well barriers he made
to keep the intruding world at bay
locked outside, barred and forgotten
so none of its noise and drama come knockin.
In a chamber dark and scarce with light,
a huddled back man sits by candlelight
hunched far over a dark wooden table
with eyes aglow in casting a fable.
In secreted place dread's call be ignored
for the penning and crafting of worlds to adore
where love and justice and freedom could reign
where work and effort could bring honest gain
where dreams came alive, instead of slain
where joy and laughter, not prejudice deign.
In a chamber dark and scarce with light,
a huddle backed man lives by candlelight
hunched far over a dark wooden table
with eyes aglow in casting a fable.
Dreamy lives continously hatching
pen and paper releasing a scratching
a huddled man, emotionally stabled
from the soul killing dredge of being differently abled.
In a chamber dark and scarce with light,
a huddle backed man lives by candlelight
hunched far over a dark wooden table
his spirit aglow in casting a fable.
"Despair-Escape 47"
by Bill's Spirit
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Comments: 18
Too be honest, I was worried about how this poem would go over; and I'm glad that so many grokked it.
Credit goes out to Ann M. and the "Surreal Circus" group for getting my mind working along Poe'ish tracks.
Thanks again.
Thanks for posting this to my group, Anythingwriting
took me to my Baltimore years...
there was a man this reminds me of...after he was murdered they found his writings and I researched his past.tragic no one knew he was a hero who never spoke except in gibberish we use to bring him food as he was so close and always had a smile and scribbled non words to give us.
His writing was perfect in the notebooks found
Big Poe fan here Black Cats are Allly and Edgy and my Daughter is Lenore
If you ever get near Balto take a day to visit his grave yard and buildings still there
I've been pondering this comment for some time; not just because it is flattering. My poem certainly is about being in a "Dark Night of The Soul" kind of place; and my writer's solution for this was to "take on" the role of God, for himself, by crafting and penning worlds that can be adored. This being the way in which the writer in the poem keeps hope, love and justice alive in his spirit; whereas otherwise he feels none.
Thank you for the thought provoking comparison.
Jericho Ring