by Terry Collett
Member since:
November 1, 2006

Grove Walk.

April 13, 2009 03:20 PM EDT
views: 54 | rating: 10/10 (13 votes) | comments: 14

They had passed
Upon this
Grove before,
Beneath that

Sun and blue
Expanse of
Sky, him there
Smiling, she

Shy, walking
And talking,
Listening
To birdsong,

Holdings hands,
Kissing lips,
Hidden by
Trees, now he

Has gone and
Died and there's
Only The breeze.
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Comments: 14 ( 1 removed by Terry Collett )

Terry Collett Apr 13, 2009, 3:21pm EDT
Poem by me and my Muse written 2006/7.
Leah Christensen Apr 13, 2009, 3:53pm EDT
A 10 for you.
Jacqueline B. Apr 13, 2009, 4:03pm EDT
Very good poem. It is a good read.
roger s. Apr 13, 2009, 5:17pm EDT
thanks for sharing
Nancy Biri Apr 13, 2009, 5:23pm EDT
Nice
Desiree T. Apr 13, 2009, 7:13pm EDT
I like it.
Georgiana S. Apr 13, 2009, 8:01pm EDT
love and loss
Stephanie S. Apr 13, 2009, 9:50pm EDT
lovely poem.
Kimber F. Apr 14, 2009, 2:59am EDT
How sad. I thought in the beginning how much it reminded me of me and my first boyfriend. But then the loss at the end made me wonder what ever happened to my first boyfriend. I hope he is now married and happy, not passed away. Thanks for sharing and peace.
Adrian Eve Revenaugh Apr 14, 2009, 3:08am EDT
Sweetly hungry for more before loss, left lingering and remorseful with the memory.
Jennine D. Apr 15, 2009, 12:39am EDT
Oh this is very sad and heart breaking a lost first love.
Fernando *Spanish poetry ground* Apr 15, 2009, 1:02am EDT
Are up for some poetry sharing? maibe we can find something to compete with, I need to improve so is good to find someone like you to learn from the experieced. HEre is a sample of mine.
I love to fall

I love to fall,
To fall from the greatest distance,
without remorse,
without limits.
By the time I have to fall,
I fly all the way to the ground,
so that way…
She could never say I had never love her…
because I had given all,
all what a man can give,
Give… For love : D
Angela A. Apr 15, 2009, 7:07pm EDT
This is such sweet poem!
Shelbia C. Aug 14, 2009, 7:34pm EDT
I enjoyed this

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