I love this! I could feel myself straightening out and taking in a huge breath of air while a smile spread across my face and I stretched out. Arms all the way out. This is a perfect in-motion poem. I will visualize this when I want to stretch now on purpose. Did it again, feels great. Wow. Interactive poetry. Who'd have thought. Well, put right right foot in, put your right foot out.
Dear Jim ~ So good to see you! Butterflies give me hope - I always smile when I see them - of course, I have some long stories about butterflies and their connections but let us just say now that this picture and this beautiful poem made me reflect and smile. Blessings. Salud
Nice! I'm guessing that your butterfly is warming its wings. I had to look up alternative definitions of "scope," and I decided that you probably mean the butterfly's limited worldview as well as the small space it occupies.
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Blessings and best wishes - S.
And, very lovely Poem!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
"Still as death...Yet pulsing with life...waiting to fly"
Thank you for posting this to The Surreal Circus.
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Lovely work, Jim.
Love it!
Nice
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Awesome, butterflies are my connection to my son. I loved this.