by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

Scorned (Snippets)

April 09, 2009 07:47 AM EDT (Updated: April 09, 2009 07:48 AM EDT)

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Deliver me from passion;

your ears hearing past falsehoods,

seeing, as penetrating eyes brim tears.

A deceitful heart is revealed!

The woman scorned wrecks havoc,

as one lost soul descends.

Tags: snippets, scorned, passion, 30 words or less

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Comments: 6

Svetlana Goryacheva Apr 9, 2009, 7:51am EDT

Very good one! :-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.

Ashley Prince Apr 9, 2009, 8:49am EDT

Very nice!

Dano C. Apr 9, 2009, 3:00pm EDT

That's the best short poem I've read in quite a long time.

Thank you.

Sheila Deeth Apr 10, 2009, 1:42pm EDT

Very powerful and neat.

Linda B. Apr 11, 2009, 11:53am EDT

I really relate to this.. wonderfully expressed.

Michelle W. Apr 21, 2009, 8:13pm EDT

I agree with Sheila, powerful! I love the opening line!


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