by Jennifer Lee
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December 31, 2008

The Fog (Hook)

April 09, 2009 01:01 AM EDT (Updated: April 09, 2009 01:33 AM EDT)
views: 39 | comments: 9

Feeble fingers emerge from mist,

reaching out to torment me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please comment whether or not you would like to read more of this poem. Thank you.

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Comments: 9

Svetlana Goryacheva Apr 9, 2009, 2:17am EDT
I'd like to read more!...

Love and hugs - S.
Leah Christensen Apr 9, 2009, 3:14am EDT
Thanks for posting this.
JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Apr 9, 2009, 10:00am EDT
Too little to really get a sense, but of course, curious.
darkly captivating~more please
Kimberly Ripley Apr 9, 2009, 11:30am EDT
An exceptional hook, Jennifer, and presently featured in the Thursday Writing Essential!
Jennifer Lee Apr 9, 2009, 11:32am EDT
Good morning, Kimberly. Thank you. I'm just about to publish the entire poem. I just need to add the copyright stamp.
Kushal Poddar Apr 9, 2009, 10:51pm EDT
It is wonderful. A complete poem.

Sun
Christine Zibas Apr 10, 2009, 1:10am EDT
Although it is complete in and of itself, I still wanted more.... A sign of good writing, for sure.
TINA s. Apr 10, 2009, 10:06am EDT
nice

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