by Christine K.
Member since:
June 23, 2007

Sunshine

April 07, 2009 11:12 AM EDT
views: 80 | rating: 10/10 (22 votes) | comments: 35

If only

The sun

would shine.

So a

better mood

would be

Mine.

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Comments: 35

Rebecca [Future Teacher] Apr 7, 2009, 11:14am EDT
Nice poem, I hope the sun shines for you soon
Netty B. Apr 7, 2009, 11:15am EDT
Very good, right to the point! And I totally agree!
Dave L. Apr 7, 2009, 11:16am EDT
true true
Christine P. Apr 7, 2009, 11:18am EDT
So very true! My mood is always better when the sun shines.
C C. Apr 7, 2009, 12:21pm EDT
thats the way i feel too!
.* Sandi * Apr 7, 2009, 12:22pm EDT
me too lol
fancy c. Apr 7, 2009, 12:37pm EDT
nice
jenn g. Apr 7, 2009, 1:04pm EDT
nice one
i came by to lend you a helping hand
kimberly g. Apr 7, 2009, 1:35pm EDT
understand completely!
Todd .. Apr 7, 2009, 2:03pm EDT
I totally agree. Today the sun is shining, unfortunately that wind is a bit chilly. Great poem!
Elaine S. Apr 7, 2009, 2:16pm EDT
I agree
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Apr 7, 2009, 2:53pm EDT
Yes, the sun can brighten any mood.
Nyota *Star* Apr 7, 2009, 3:12pm EDT
cute!
Michelle W. Apr 7, 2009, 3:58pm EDT
Nice couplet!
Jo N. Apr 7, 2009, 6:14pm EDT
Nice!
Dana W. Apr 7, 2009, 7:22pm EDT
Thank you for posting to VRC

glitter-graphics.com
Leigh Featherstone Apr 7, 2009, 8:18pm EDT
This is so nice man really nice.


PIF
Georgiana S. Apr 7, 2009, 10:03pm EDT
I follow the sun!
phil w. Apr 7, 2009, 11:10pm EDT
Christine ,It's gonna' shine again. Nice snippet.
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Apr 9, 2009, 2:24pm EDT
Helping Hands

Have a Blessed Day!
Nancy Biri Apr 10, 2009, 9:19am EDT
Nice poem....HH
Elise w. Apr 11, 2009, 12:15am EDT
Great poem! I love the sun and I hope it comes out and stays out for Easter! Have a great weekend and thank you so much for playing my game! :-)
necee t. Apr 11, 2009, 7:51pm EDT
short and sweet... the sunshine makes me feel better too...
<center>
Easter
</center>
*LORA* M. Apr 12, 2009, 3:58am EDT
neat
Linda M. Apr 12, 2009, 10:35pm EDT
How true!
DIANE D. Apr 14, 2009, 8:42am EDT
Great poem, I so agree~
Sarah (I want points) Apr 14, 2009, 10:54am EDT
I definitely understand this one. It's supposed to be grey and dreary here for the next several days!
Elizabeth S. Apr 14, 2009, 5:30pm EDT
extending Helping Hands
APE 131313 Apr 15, 2009, 12:07am EDT
APRIL HELPING HANDS reaching out to you!
Ralph J. Apr 17, 2009, 5:02pm EDT
Very nice!
Shaunee C. Apr 17, 2009, 5:18pm EDT
That is very nice. You write poems very well.
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Apr 22, 2009, 8:23am EDT
Nice poem
Janie E. May 31, 2009, 12:24am EDT

It's funny how the weather plays on our emotions. Sweet poem!
D. K. Jul 22, 2009, 11:52pm EDT
the sun always makes me smile =)

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