Hello everyone
I've been away for a while. I know that many but not all of you have forgotten all about me.
Not all of you because some of you are my most dear friends.
But for those who have forgotten me, here is a reminder of, and for any new visitors that may come along, here is an introduction to, my writing.
This extract comes from my Walking With Poetry.
When she eventually turned to look at me again, she was somehow different. Even her voice was different. It was calmer and more self-assured.
"So, if you're a poetry teacher, as you say, then surely you should be able to recite a poem to me right now. Not just any poem. One that will tell me what real poetry is all about."
I studied her through squinted eyes. It dawned on me, that she had just asked a most significant question.
"Do you mean that you want me to reveal to you the holy grail of all poems?"
"Yes, that's just about it. Come on Mr. Teacher."
Acting on an impulse, I walked over to her and went down on one knee. As I looked up into her eyes, I saw for the first time how dark brown they were. I had to however, close my own
eyes for a moment as I tried to visualise how Sir Laurence Olivier would have acted on such a situation. Then I cleared my throat a little theatrically.
"How can you write when you haven't lived?
How can you live if you haven't seen a dancing trout?
How can you dance
If you haven't seen a deer at play?
How can you sing
If you haven't seen the place where music was born?"
Her eyes had grown larger. It was as if she was beginning to see me for the first time.
"Wow, that’s really good, Dinel, but please don't be a fool now. Don't kneel in front of me. Go and sit on that rock over there."
Her words were a great relief to me. I don't think that I could've kept resting my knee on those sharp rocks for much longer
"Go on, Dinel, finish your poem. You have my interest."
With a polite nod, I acknowledged both her appreciation and her gentle command.
"These hands of mine can write because, I've held a wriggling fish. My eyes can see because they've watched as eagles mate and my ears can hear
because they've heard a tiger purr."
"Aha. You're saying that I can't write poetry because I haven't held a wriggling fish in my hands? When will I ever be able to do that, you silly man?"
I rose quickly to my feet and held out my hands to her in a gesture of appeal.
"In my school, you will learn that, Alisha. Come with me and let's walk through that wood. OK, it's a 25 kilometers walk but we'll get to your college by tomorrow afternoon. The train will only get there by late tomorrow night. It really takes a long time to get to its destination. It's all those winding curves that make the train slow down and then there's that long wait for the connection."


Comments: 40
Blessings and best wishes - S.
I wish you the best down there in South Africa. I hope you are enjoying your Palm Sunday. Granada is massing with at least one hundred thousand tourists and faithful in the streets, waiting for the first processions to come out of the churches. I can hear them ringing out their doleful sound. I hear the sad trumpets in the distance. The lugubrious music of the saetas has begun. What a propitious moment to renew a virtual acquaintance!
Welcome back! I think I'm the official erraticest Gatherer! :P
:)
Methinks I remember this from before, but it captured me again.
Thank you!
How can you live if you haven't seen a dancing trout?
How can you dance
If you haven't seen a deer at play?
How can you sing
If you haven't seen the place where music was born?"
Oh Fred - you're wonderful - sending much love on this Easter holiday. Salud
To be called gifted by you is an extreme honour. After all, aren't you known as the Bard? *smile*
I appreciate your comments highly.
You are one of my most loyal friends. Thank you for always being ready to respond.
I value your praise highly.
Welcome to my humble home. I wonder if you know how often i lurk around your articles. I find many of them to be very fascinating. OK I haven't commented enough... but I will.
Thank you for your visit and your re-assurance. Wow, your avatar seems so timely for the Easter weekend.
Or can those Easter egg things have to be chickens only and not ducks?
Oh I spend a lot of time in what we call the bushveld. It's the ideal sort of place to re-charge ones' spiritual batteries. We are blessed to have here the most wonderful scenic beauties but the bushveld remains the ultimate experience.
I envy you your stay in Spain. My little 10 day ration of Spain remains unforgettable.
I'm so happy to see you here. Thank you for coming.
Oh how much I've missed my old friends. I often think back to all our conversations and the fun that we had.
Big hugs and love to you too.
Thank you for coming to visit and for remembering me. I really appreciate that.
You are one of those that I missed most. Some of you are never out of my mind and, yes, Elsie you and I have danced.
If it wasn't for this damn downturn I might have been in the States right now. What a treat it would have been to visit you.
Where have you been???? Where are you now??? You are far too erraticist.
Please stay in touch. I'll promise to turn over anew leaf if you will. *smile*
If you were walking with me in the woods and I had caught a trout...I would have asked you to prepare it.
I've been looking at some of your cooking articles and you're the best.
Thank you for your visit.. You're always welcome.
Thank you for you Easter wishes. It's still Easter now. It's such an important time. Let me send you much love on this momentous occasion.
I know that we are very special friends and i value that.
Is this the first time that we meet?
If so then let me say "pleased to meet you" and invite you to come over whenever you can.
Your short short stories of up to two pages seem your best. Your longer stories seem to get overwhelmed with detail. So, there you have an honest appraisal from me.
Well you've succeeded in starting a new memory and so next time you could possibly forget or not forget.
I'll go over to the new friends' department. Thank you in advance.
No dance lessons. But I should go but no body wants to teach a man with three legs and along spiky tail.
Well thanks for that review. Wow...there's so much truth in what you say. I feel very much at home in the 2-4 page story...as you suggest. If I get bogged down in detail please blame Ian Fleming who wrote the James Bond stories. He was wont to describe every item on menus and was fascinated by the vineyard and vintage of every glass of wine drunk. I had better move on and set a faster pace.
I come from Pretoria, the home of the Blue Bulls. They are even stronger than the national side. The Blue Bulls could take on the All Blacks any day. Bill, your general knowledge is superb. You know about the All Blacks...wow!
Ummm....about that Voodoo doll. Don't you think you shoud put it away somewhere safe?
And I won't forget you.. You'll see more of me soon.
I do have a problem with amounts of detail. Some want more. But I feel, like you, that there should be less. So I've begun to do this. I go over my writings and I deliberately cut out 10 %. I prefer a taut style but perhaps, like you say, I expound forth too much at times.
Thank you for your cautionary words. I'll keep a sharp look out. Thanks Bill.
I was once told I could not write what I had not experienced, and when I did, had people tell me I was lying about NOT having the experience. I have been told the mind cannot tell the difference between what has been experienced and what has been vividly imagined, therefore I can only conclude that I have a vivid imagination.
Anyway, that was the memory your story brought up ... well done!!
Thanks for posting in Journey Into Poetry !
;)
Who will forget you?