by Christine K.
Member since:
June 23, 2007

Danger(Poetry Nation Faceoff)

March 31, 2009 01:29 PM EDT
views: 96 | rating: 10/10 (18 votes) | comments: 31

She could smell,

Danger,

In the pitch black night.

She could hear,

Danger,

As she fumbled for a light.

She could feel,

Danger,

As she held her breath.

She could see,

Danger,

Just before her death.

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Comments: 31

Dana W. Mar 31, 2009, 1:45pm EDT
very nice
Jo N. Mar 31, 2009, 1:46pm EDT
Nice, thanks for sharing.
Nora Davenport Mar 31, 2009, 1:53pm EDT
Beautiful poem, Christine!
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Mar 31, 2009, 1:58pm EDT
Very nice and you can really feel it
Desiree T. Mar 31, 2009, 2:22pm EDT
good
Nancy S. Mar 31, 2009, 2:40pm EDT
That felt scary. Good one.
Christine P. Mar 31, 2009, 3:07pm EDT
Very intense poem. Well written.
Maggie Y. Mar 31, 2009, 5:15pm EDT
very nice!
Paying It Forward!
Elaine S. Mar 31, 2009, 6:05pm EDT
very good
fancy c. Mar 31, 2009, 6:22pm EDT
VERY NICE
M & M. Mar 31, 2009, 6:44pm EDT
Excellent poem dear.
Hope you have a great day sweetie.

Christian Glitter by www.christianglitter.com
tammie p. Mar 31, 2009, 7:07pm EDT
very nice
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Mar 31, 2009, 7:34pm EDT
Very good!
Christine G. Mar 31, 2009, 9:50pm EDT
Thanks for sharing.
phil w. Mar 31, 2009, 10:00pm EDT
Kind of eerie ! but good.
C C. Apr 1, 2009, 7:44pm EDT
very nice
Charity M. Apr 1, 2009, 9:27pm EDT
((( short...to the point ))) Good Luck!
Sharon C. Apr 1, 2009, 11:00pm EDT
Wow! that sent shivers down my spine. Good luck
Lisa Frost Apr 4, 2009, 2:08pm EDT
Intense, stark
Maryjo E. Apr 5, 2009, 8:54pm EDT
Very Nice
Very nice job
Leora E. Apr 5, 2009, 9:52pm EDT
Good one !!!! Congrats on your win, :)
Jacquie M. Apr 5, 2009, 10:19pm EDT
Great one- simple, yet poignant. Thank you for sharing.
Elsie Duggan Apr 5, 2009, 11:36pm EDT
Excellent, congratulations on your win,
Angie O. Apr 6, 2009, 12:11am EDT
Intense, good poem.
Joy McCormick Apr 6, 2009, 8:23am EDT
Great imagery
Maria W. Apr 6, 2009, 8:39am EDT
Great poem. Congrats on your win.
penni d. Apr 6, 2009, 10:01am EDT
methinks one DOES tend to see,feel, smell danger..this was good!
Charity M. Apr 6, 2009, 12:10pm EDT
((( Congarats..on a very good poem! )))
Elise w. May 16, 2009, 1:08pm EDT
Great rhyming from beginning to end. creative too! :-)
Shelbia C. May 25, 2009, 12:05am EDT

This is good

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