Parents, I need your feedback again...

I posted another children's story of mine and would love to hear what age group you think it would appeal to. I'd also like to know how you think it would be received by children. I tried to get the library to let me read it to the kids there but they won't allow a book that isn't already published to be read to the children. I guess I can understand that because if the kids like it, they will want Mom and Dad to buy it. But I really need the feedback and guidance on what age group to focus on.

The name of the story is The Hero of Whistle Forest and here is the link.