by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Her Eyes

March 16, 2009 12:20 PM EDT
views: 76 | comments: 17

Her eyes...

transparent pools of glass;

When shattered,

tears rain down.

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Comments: 17

Leah Christensen Mar 16, 2009, 12:32pm EDT
Thanks for posting this.
Michelle W. Mar 16, 2009, 12:39pm EDT
Beautiful
J W. Mar 16, 2009, 12:41pm EDT
nice poem
**AngelEyez** a. Mar 16, 2009, 12:51pm EDT
Very beautiful...
Kimber L. Mar 16, 2009, 1:28pm EDT
Beautiful!
Cheryl,
Short, and so much feeling -- I don't know how you do it, but somehow, you can and do.

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Marilyn
Maggie Y. Mar 16, 2009, 5:21pm EDT
very nice
Janie E. Mar 16, 2009, 6:39pm EDT
Good job, Cheryl!
Nancy S. Mar 16, 2009, 7:41pm EDT
Nice haiku.
Larry H. Mar 16, 2009, 8:42pm EDT
THANKS FOR SHARING..
Penny M. Mar 16, 2009, 9:11pm EDT
nice
Kevin E. Mar 16, 2009, 9:28pm EDT
Cheryl you say so much with so few words. You illicit so much emotion so quickly with so few words. You are an amazing poet!
Cristina S. Mar 16, 2009, 10:42pm EDT
Well done!
Jennifer Lee Mar 16, 2009, 11:26pm EDT
Good poem, did you submit it to the Snippets group?
John F Walter Mar 17, 2009, 6:49am EDT
Succinct image that captures great suffering lyrically.
Lisa Frost Mar 25, 2009, 1:58am EDT
a lot said in a short space!

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