This is a "party" entry for Sandy Knauer's Tuesday Writing Essential. Details found here.
Winston Rafferty has a secret. It's no secret that he's a flight attendant for American Airlines. He's been in the job for about a year, but to Winston, it may as well be a lifetime. You can read this on Winston's face with every "Welcome aboard," he utters.
He seems a bit different than other flight attendants in that he doesn't look the part. Winston is a bit portly for one. His uniform pulls tightly around his chest, and his pants seem to be cinched a bit too tight around his generous belly.
While many of the male flight attendants seem to be gay, Winston seems pretty straight, not that you can read sexual orientation from a job or from a quick glance at the man pushing the beverage cart. However, while many of Winston's counterparts seem downright fussy about their appearances -- designer shoes, belt and fashionable eyewear to dress up their boring uniforms -- Winston seems completely blah. He drives a silver Toyota Camry, not a flashy red anything. He was almost married once, but didn't see the point.
His shoes, while shiny, are not designer. He doesn't wear glasses, and he doesn't pluck his rather bushy eyebrows. His skin is clean, but his pores have not been subjected to peach pit compotes, dermabrasion or hours under a sunlamp.
Another thing that differentiates Winston is his flat affect. He is unflappable. Completely. The screaming, vomiting baby in row 3? Towels and an extra barf bag for the frazzled mom. The portly man who needs not one but two seatbelt extenders? Winston hands him both following his dull re-enactment of the flight safety briefing.
However, what differentiates Winston the most is what no one sees. Winston can sing like an angel. You wouldn't guess this from his demeanor, nor his normal flat speaking voice, with his Midwestern intonations.
In his jacket pocket, Winston has a cassette tape of his rendition of Don Giovanni. An identical copy of this tape sits on the desk of an opera agent in New York at this moment. Said opera agent is frantic because this tape has no name on it, but the voice on the tape would make Placido Domingo cry from the sheer beauty.
Winston pushes the drinks cart back to the front of the aircraft and empties another bag of ice into the bucket. He glances briefly at the formerly-screaming vomiting baby in row 3 and lets a small sigh escape. Another flight completed and only 7000 or so until his retirement, gold watch and thanks from a barely grateful company. If only he could have gotten someone to listen to his audition tape.
The flight lands and Winston watches row after row of passengers deplaning, all the while Mozart runs through his head. As the last passenger leaves, a single tear runs down Winston's cheek. He wipes it away, pulls on his jacket and walks -- head down -- into the terminal.


Comments: 42
I like this: and he doesn't pluck his rather bushy eyebrows. (Sorry, it's an inside joke.)
That line made me giggle, and Winston seems like a very interesting character, I like him(:
"Didn't see the point" indeed, lol, I tend to concurr ;)
Ina, I'm so sure yours will be an Audubon Society bird watcher in fancy shoes.
Oh! X needs to see your bathroom story, Emme. He might want to take Winston there.
(and I just read Doyle's portly character intro as well, interesting)
Simply delicious, X-Tabber! Well done.
Lovely write, and I can't wait to see what our singing flying winger does in the future.
Beautiful--I'm rooting for him already.
Wilka
This should be fun. Too bad we can't submit an audio tape.
Have you read anything by Anne Tyler? I love her characters, and I love Winston as well.
I can picture him clearly, nice job.
I really like this character already and he reminds me (in some ways) of that old Harry Chapin song about the man who loved to sing, Mr. Tanner as it immediately brought it to mind and it's a song I also love. I'm truly wondering where this is going. Great job! (Yes, I will do mine.... soon.)
Marilyn
Only Sandy knows, since Winston is now a slave to her whim :)
I love him and his "unflappable nature." The tear running down his cheek could be for anything, and I can't wait to find out the cause!
Sorry not to comment until now. Truthfully, didn't know we were supposed to. Kinda used to going to a museum, admiring the art, but never knowing the artists to say anything. :blush:
That being said, this is the second time I've met up with Winston, so far. He reminds me of most people I've met in my life (including me) - never was about the j-o-b, just about what the money from it can do to spackle a large hole in our soul.
Glad Winston's cassette is proof he is filling that hole. Seems typical of most I know, that he forgot to sign the copy at the opera agent's office. Not sure if it matters for Winston, if that agent ever figures it out. Ultimately, in the end, the thing that fills that space in our soul is for our own benefit. Only difference here, is something I am just now realizing - there is a larger group of people then previously thought - the world needs to hear Winston. From your writing, I'm hoping the world gets to read you!
How much has society missed, because of the time involved to gather enough money to exist, before doing what so many artists need to live? (Or because they forgot to sign their name on the art?)
Ah Sandy! Only meant I'm holding onto Winston in case you have some exercises for him to do. Just know that he does NOT like to perspire :)
I can't wait to see what happens with him ;-)
just starting so, I wanted to get a feel for what u all needed, this is goin got be fun, m y eyes are seeing double, so, I wll work on this tommorrow, thanks again for letting me join, and I cant wait to see what my character is going to do/go, ect, this is such great advice, thanks again I feel kind of like I am cheating since you all have done so much all ready, but, I will try to work fast good night everyone!