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by Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer
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December 19, 2005

Party Time! Come See What’s New at Tuesday’s Writing Essential

February 24, 2009 11:04 AM EST (Updated: March 11, 2009 01:38 AM EDT)
views: 702 | rating: 7.8/10 (42 votes) | comments: 194

If you have been around Gather longer than five minutes, chances are you’re already tired of hearing me complain about games, or you’ve grown weary of hearing others complain about me complaining about games. If you will stick with me here, I am going to change my tune – a little.

Jennifer Hodge offered me a much-appreciated opportunity to combine fun and writing in the role of Gather Writing Essential’s Tuesday Member Editor. At first, editor sounded too much like a four-letter word beginning with the letter ‘w’. This was scary to someone whose mother spent forty years trying to convince her that life is not a party, and who would rather play than w—k . . . Quick! Someone name a safer word that starts with the letter ‘w’.

When the initial shock wore off, I realized that, with a little creativity, I could turn games into writing, and with a lot of coercion I might convince my political friends to join my writing friends in some activities, and people who have never written before might enjoy creating characters and sticking them in stories that others have already written, and we could turn Gather into one huge writing game. And readers might stop by to tell me that sentences like that last one make their eyes bleed and their heads spin, and editors might want to tell me I can’t write run-on sentences like these, no matter how excited I am, and with all those people here it would feel like a party.

If I can make it more like a party than a four-letter word that starts with the letter ‘w’, I’m game. That’s what I plan to do on Tuesdays, and hope you will join me. If you’ll overlook the troll, grammar police, and elitist tags I’ve collected around here, I’ll show you who I really am and how we can have a great time writing and playing together.

I believe the person who said we all have a book in us (anybody want to name that person, or would it be more fun to attribute it to the person commenting below us), and I know every one of us can spill our book onto paper – or screen for the more dedicated tree huggers – with the right encouragement and commitment. Not to shortchange my self-esteem, but I cranked out nine novels, everyone else can do one.

Before you panic, I’m not asking anyone to submit a novel for Tuesday Writing Essential. My plan is to organize (another word that scares me) ongoing, interactive projects through which we will develop characters through games, turn personal experiences into fiction, have our characters interact with one another, sneak them into each other’s work, and write stories together - some of which you might want to expand into novels.

Even if you aren’t interested in writing a novel, I hope you will hang around as a reader, a player, or an editor – at least long enough to create a character with the rest of us. That way, you will be prepared if you decide to join in later.

Since my plan involves assigned projects, and to accommodate a range of schedules and time zones, the currently posted project will be for submissions on the following Tuesday. I will specify dates when posting, to make this clearer.

Today, February 24, 2009, will be an open fiction day for submissions. I will feature writers, readers, nitpickers, and gracious hosts.

The exercise for submissions next Tuesday, March 3, is to create a physical description for the character you would like to enter in this game (almost like creating an alter only we’ll be proud to claim them because we’ll know how to keep them in character), and to invite your friends to join the Gather Writing Essential group so they can write with us.

 

Things to include in your physical description (game association – “tag one another” lists that are going around): Name, gender, age, nationality, height, weight, body type, hair/skin/eye color, clothing style, marital/family status, car, career

 

Tags: fiction, funtue1, character development

In keeping with Gather Writing Essential goals (The Writing Essential was created as a home for Gather writers to congregate and publish their work and receive constructive criticism, as well as to share their experiences and ask questions about the craft of writing), I ask you not to cross-post with any group whose primary reason for existence is to attract views for points or rating boosts, generic comments, picture comments (this is about writing so we should use words), or to pay anything forward or backward. Those comments will distract from pertinent discussion. Also, in order to satisfy the group’s stated atmosphere of congregation and discussion, comments must be open to everyone, without moderation, and only removed if they violate TOS or require an adult flag that the posting member has not opted to use.

I look forward to spending Tuesdays with you and welcome your comments and suggestions on this thread.

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Comments: 194

Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 11:17am EST
Wait. So I can take MY character and drop him in someone else's story? Hmmm.

"...I might convince my political friends to join my writing friends in some activities..."

Umm. Sheesh. Wonder which category I fall in here? Do you have a genius friends category?
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Lori F. Feb 24, 2009, 11:18am EST
hmm interesting.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:19am EST
Doyle, you fit all of the above categories (writer, political, friend, genius). I guess this means you have no way out. Are you ready to drop your character into someone else's story? I'll be fun.
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 11:20am EST
>Quick! Someone name a safer word that starts with the letter ‘w’.

WANKER !!!
barb n. Jul 23, 2009, 6:16pm EDT
ROFL!!!!!!!!
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 11:21am EST
Peter, I'm not sure that qualifies as safer! :)
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:21am EST
Lori! Another well-rounded friend. Maybe some of you will need more than one character. Hope you're going to play with us.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 11:22am EST
Well, I joined the group. I had been a member but had become disillusioned. I'm willing to give it a shot.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:22am EST
Peter may not be safe, but he's always fun. Let me guess your character. Does she like wire hangers?
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:22am EST
Barbara, I promise your disillusionment is in the past.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:23am EST
Is disillusionment a word? Where are the editors?
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 11:23am EST
I agree that Peter is fun :) WHOSE character are you referring to? Mine or Peter's?
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 11:24am EST
I believe disillusionment is a word. It wouldn't fit in most mainstream novels, though. :) IMO, of course.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 11:25am EST
I have a question ... are we placing this in the present day? On Earth? Makes a difference to which character I submit.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 11:29am EST
I was talking about Peter's character then, but am talking about yours now. If you want your character to travel time and space, there are no restrictions.
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E. M. Feb 24, 2009, 11:32am EST
This sounds wonderful and exciting and scary. If anyone can pull this off it would be you, Sandy.

I may need to sit on the sidelines for a while (or maybe forever), but I will be here, reading and marveling at some of you people.
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 11:34am EST
My 70's sex change (in denial) from Bad Movies is one of my favorites.

No wait. My 1930's pot smoking lesbian dance hall owner from Hollywood Sinners, Mama Gravy.

No wait, Billy Haines (a real person) Joan Crawford's gay best friend ...
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 11:35am EST
No wait, my next novel Merlin's Charge ... I AM MERLIN !!!
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 11:35am EST
(I can't stand just being one person)
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Lainie - Just Lainie Feb 24, 2009, 11:39am EST
This definitely sounds challenging.
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donna f. Feb 24, 2009, 11:58am EST
Sounds like a blast, Sandy. Only you could come up with something that is almost all inclusive. Bravo!
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St. Joy The Baptist M. © Cranky-Pants, Mercenary and Coroner Feb 24, 2009, 12:06pm EST
Just for you, Sandy, I think I'm going to give this a whirl; exercise the ol' chops, so to speak. But I've got a week, right?
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:22pm EST
EM, sorry, but I can't accept scary as an excuse. Not after I suffered the w--K word and fear of not one person showing up for this. I promise a painless experience.

Peter, maybe your character can have MPD?

Lainie, challenging in a fun way ;-)

Thank you, Donna. All inclusive is my goal.

A week, Joy. We'll always have a week to complete the next project/exercise/goal/game.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:25pm EST
The person below me is planning a character whose name begins with a letter.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:29pm EST
John, this is Gather. And this is a Gather-support writing project. I think this is what we've been hoping for.
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Dannielle S. Feb 24, 2009, 12:35pm EST
Sandy, you already know Tuesdays are music days for me; I hope we're allowed to be a day or two late but still participate.

Your entire concept sounds wonderful and inspiring!
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Dame Ruth, Chief Executive Elitist D. Feb 24, 2009, 12:35pm EST
How prescient of you! My character will indeed start with a letter: "Dear Editor: Best wishes, Your adoring fiancée.
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Dame Ruth, Chief Executive Elitist D. Feb 24, 2009, 12:36pm EST
That was supposed to follow your "person below me" comment. Obviously.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:41pm EST
Dannielle, I tried to take into consideration people who have real lives and little time for this. We'll all have a week, which should give the rest of you time to squeeze this in and me time to look for my errors before posting.

I knew it! I'll bet Dannielle's character's name will also start with a letter. (I'm psychic, you know.)
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Mark Jepsen Feb 24, 2009, 12:46pm EST
Sounds interesting! I'm contemplating potential characters and traits even now!

As to participant categories, might I suggest one that offers a bit of latitude, yet which might apply handily to myself:

Underachiever genius or overachiever moron? You be the judge!
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Priscilla P. Feb 24, 2009, 12:48pm EST
This sounds awfully advanced. Do I need to get the groups profile rearranged so that I get the feed on Gather Writing essentials? I want to be a 60's poetry reading pot smoking, long skirted big breasted philosophy student
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:49pm EST
Mark, I'm anxious to see your characters! And really excited to see that you are considering more than one.

If forced to put you in either of those participant categories, I would choose underachiever genius.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 12:56pm EST
Ooooh, Priscilla, I like your character already.

I need you! I've been a little concerned about logistics (in case you didn't notice, organization is one of those words that gives me hives). I think I can make this work through tags, and by posting links to everyone's submissions, grouped by week. That will give anyone who comes in late a chance to catch up, and help everyone who wants to keep up.

If you have suggestions, or want to help, please let me know.
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Rose (just an ole GA peach) Williams Feb 24, 2009, 1:16pm EST
Sandy--This is the BEST news I've seen on Gather since I came back after taking a few months break...and having been a Gather Writing editor before, I have to warn you it does involve a little of the "w" word ;-) But you are such an amazing writer and sound like you have a LOT of great ideas.

I love what the Writing Essentials group is and can be--and I look forward to your stewardship here on Tuesdays, I mean it!! Giving advanced warning and prep time really does enhance the experience for those who want to participate...sounds like it will be interesting. Count me in!
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 1:27pm EST
Thank you, Rose. I'm excited, especially after communicating with Jennifer and discovering her dedication to writing. Hopefully, we will make this group all she designed it to be. I appreciate your excitement and hope you'll help bring other writers in. We can make this our little corner of Gather, because that is what it was designed to be.
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Debbie G. Feb 24, 2009, 1:33pm EST
Sandy, I find this exciting. I hope I am up to the challenge. I'd love to see it succeed.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 1:38pm EST
I'm trying to come up with a character name that does NOT start with a letter... hmm ... :)
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Ina ♥ Tagline Free Since September '09 ♥ Feb 24, 2009, 1:39pm EST
One of the reasons that I rarely participate in the WE group is that the prompts usually come out in the morning and we're expected to have something ready to be published (yes, I said published ) on the same day. I generally can't work like that and need lots of time to think and edit.

So, just because of that , I might have to play, too.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 1:47pm EST
Debbie, of course you are up to the challenge. If I've done my job right, there is a role in here for everyone.

Barbara, you might check with some of the people who have hearts and music notes ;-)

Ina, you're speaking straight to my heart here! I don't work like that either, and really wish some of the people who do work that way would stop. Writers should take the time to think and edit. Even the best ones. Please tell me you will play.
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Robert S. Feb 24, 2009, 1:48pm EST
8Henry - The eight is silent.
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Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 1:55pm EST
"I want to be a 60's poetry reading pot smoking, long skirted big breasted philosophy student ..."

Uhhhh. So...umm...how YOU doin'? :o)
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 1:55pm EST
Robert's ahead of the game! That is your character, right? And you'll be back week to play?
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 1:56pm EST
^ a 'next' in that last comment
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Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 2:05pm EST
You want this character fleshed out in an expository written form or like the listy thing?
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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Feb 24, 2009, 2:08pm EST
I'm in. Definitely. I've been waiting for something like this for awhile, though now that I don't have much time to even be online, nevermind on Gather, I'm taking the time for this!
NOTE:
I am not supposed to be here now. Nope. I'm supposed to be cooking for our aunt/cousin who're both not doing well - but when I read that you were doing Tuesdays, I had to come and see. Does that make me an underachiever, an overachiever or an idiot? I take no offense at anything anyone may say to that.

You're right, Sandy and Ina - I need time to think, write, edit, re-edit, re-edit some more and then.... maybe (it's share now, right?) share.

I'm considering being a commune owner where we can all live together in relative harmony, except on alternate days. With long hair of course; maybe braided.
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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Feb 24, 2009, 2:12pm EST
We will grow everything. I will distill patchouli. Make soap. My name will be HealingLite.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:14pm EST
Emme, these will be written characters - we don't create alters with them. And yes, a week is how long we have to work on our physical descriptions.

Doyle, don't jump to week six on me! I won't have anything to post weeks 2 - 5. This week, we just do a physical description ;-)

So glad you're in, Marilyn. Does that make me an underachiever, an overachiever or an idiot? That makes you one of my favorite people. I love the commune owner idea. I'll have to search out some beads and flowers for my hair.
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Jennifer Hodge Feb 24, 2009, 2:18pm EST
Sandy, This sounds challenging and fun. Count me in. I like the fact that you are handing out assignments a week in advance. That gives me a chance to sweep out the cobwebs in my attic and try to find my creativity.
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Ina ♥ Tagline Free Since September '09 ♥ Feb 24, 2009, 2:21pm EST
Well, I actually opened up a Word document to start creating a character on. I generally suck at fiction, but I'm game.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:22pm EST
Yay! I'm so glad you are going to join us, Jennifer. Not only will we have a week to work on these, the assignments will still be posted for people who miss a week or two so they can go back and catch up.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:25pm EST
Thanks, Ina. I can't imagine anyone as creative as you sucking at fiction.
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Tanya P. Feb 24, 2009, 2:26pm EST
I'm not sure if I have any latent talent along this line, but I think I'll give it a try. What the heck?! It's not like you know where I live and can come take physical revenge for any failure and/or success I might have at this.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 2:40pm EST
Okay, not a character name with a heart as the first character, that's for sure! LOL! That's not my style. I was thinking something with an unpronouncable character that represents some exotic sound like a click or something. :) Of course, if I get hung up on the name, I'll never get to the rest of it!
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:42pm EST
Tanya, I'm all the proof you need that anyone can write. I don't know how to convince everyone that it's fun without tricking them into trying, though. Thanks for being a sport, and I promise no one will take physical revenge on anyone - unless they write it into a story, and then we can call it suspense (or humor, depending on how believable it is).

Cute, Jim. Thanks. We could probably use a lazy character, but we'll always need readers, cheerleaders, and editors if you decide you don't want to write.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:43pm EST
I was thinking something with an unpronouncable character that represents some exotic sound like a click or something. I'll bet Aniko can help with this.

You have a week to try on names, Barbara. (Ask Janna and Dave about that.)
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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Feb 24, 2009, 2:47pm EST
Hmmm, Jim?
I could really use someone lazy on the commune, you know - for others to make weed the garden or something? (your name can't be Jim though)
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Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Feb 24, 2009, 2:47pm EST
How does one who IS a character begin at creating one? Sounds like fun, though. My muse has been sort of flat lately. MAybe this is what I need to get it revved.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:50pm EST
Ron, you just bring your muse over here and we'll pump him up.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 2:53pm EST
How does one who IS a character begin at creating one?

Where to find characters?

The person you want to be
The person you don't want to be
The person you want to manipulate through some fun times
The person you want to manipulate through some horrible times
Someone you met in a dream (I created one based on a man I passed in the doorway at the drug store)
A twisted person you'd like to introduce to the world

Help! That's a start - I'm sure others have some better ideas.
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Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 3:01pm EST
JUST a list of physical characteristics, name and occupation? I already found a really, really, really interesting guy. Mr. A. J. Tinker. Can he play?
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 3:05pm EST
Bring him on, Doyle. A. J. Tinker sounds like fun. Will he tinker with my car or my heart?

Just physical description this week. Of course, you're invited to make it as entertaining as you like. It doesn't have to be a list.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 3:18pm EST
How about "L’ona"? I’m open to suggestions. I want an “aw” sound for the “o”.

I considered Lonna. What do you guys think? Her name should be just a shade exotic but not obviously of any nationality.

For a last name I'm considering Maliel (mah-leel) but that doesn't flow very well with L'ona. And it sort of sounds Hawaiian to my ears. I'm trying for something either no one else has (rather hard) or at least unusual but still nice-sounding. I don't want an ugly name.
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Ava's Mom (formerly known as Robiyah) Feb 24, 2009, 3:18pm EST
I'm going to sit in the wings and watch other people play, then I might join. It depends on how it all goes down, really.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 3:37pm EST
Barbara, I've been told that I suck at names. I thought I gave my daughters unusual names, and then every girl born in the next ten years after they were born ended up with the same name. Two people I know used my second daughter's name after I did - first and middle names. Sigh. Others will have to help you here. I like the name you've chosen, but if I say it might jinx you and ten more will show up.

Robi, are you just here looking for names for your NEW BABY! You aren't getting out of this game because I know you already have some characters. I've read them.
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 3:46pm EST
I already did a Sybyl, once.

I think I need to work up a normal boring person unlike anything I've ever done before, like a old Baptist church secretary who gossips about the janitor, who denies global warming.

(it hurts, it hurts ... IT BURNS !!!)
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 3:56pm EST
Peter, I did a character like the one you're talking about. She was tons of fun.
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☀ Aunt Shanny Feb 24, 2009, 4:07pm EST
I've got a book in me, but not the words to write it.
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Dame Ruth, Chief Executive Elitist D. Feb 24, 2009, 4:14pm EST
Jess wants to be Jane Bond, secret agent Double D with a license to thrill.
I shall be her nemesis, Golden Crotch, who has been hiding The Ultimate Weapon of Mass Destruction in the litter box of the Calico Cat of Catastrophe.
We're already working on plot points which include Hugh Jackman, Ina and her Plutonium shoes and Trexler Topping.
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Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 4:15pm EST
"Of course, you're invited to make it as entertaining as you like. It doesn't have to be a list. "

WOOO HOOO! Oh...you'll be entertained alright. Well. Perhaps entertained is NOT the right word. :o)
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Mark N. Feb 24, 2009, 4:19pm EST
i understand you'all might be havin' sum fun aroun here come next tuesday, i want in. I will live on the commune and even bathe. I will be a barber and i will grow all the weed the commune will need to stay healthy. I too will have flowers in my hair. Lookin forward to it, i will see you there. I might be engaged to you Sandy, i'm not real sure. We'll have to feel that one out. Marilyn says shes ok with it so we're good on that end.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 4:20pm EST
Shannon, bring your book idea here and we'll pull those words out of you. Promise. (And I know you can write - weren't you in Travis' group? I'm sure I remember you being there with some impressive words.)

Sounds great, Ruth and Jess. Humor and adventure - sorta like Carl Hiaason?

Doyle, I think you'll have to submit yours today. Curiosity my kill me before next week.
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Doyle ( IS SOOO 7 for 7 soon... ) C. Feb 24, 2009, 4:21pm EST
Barbara...considered Lonnie? Male, Female...a nickname for almost any nationality. I have a Hawaiian friend (twins) Lonnie and Nonnie. Don't know Nonnie. Both women. Both hot. Lonnie is an artist and painter in a high-rise loft in downtown LA.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 4:21pm EST
Mark, of course you are welcome! We're looking for people who bathe. And there's not a thing I can do if you write me engaged - well, except deny it and cry - but the words will still be there for the whole world to see.
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JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Feb 24, 2009, 4:23pm EST
Sandy - I literally just did the same exercise with my Creative Writing students! :)
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 4:23pm EST
Curiosity my that could be may or might - or a combination of the two.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 4:25pm EST
Cool, JustMe! That means you're ready to jump in, right? You'll be here to pick up all the pieces I drop?
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Ina ♥ Tagline Free Since September '09 ♥ Feb 24, 2009, 4:29pm EST
Woo hoo! Ruth and Jess are giving me plutonium shoes and Hugh Jackman!

Could life possibly get any better?
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JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Feb 24, 2009, 4:32pm EST
Sandy - You don't need me. I have total confidence in you. I will try to create one for Rachel, from the story I began, "Connection".
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 4:35pm EST
Doyle: Thanks for the suggestion. Lonnie sounds like a diminutive of Lonna. It don't hate the name, but in my mind's eye I see a big-haired blond turning letters. (Arg! Get it out!) Lon'a seemed more ... exotic ... but I didn't want her to come across as obviously bizarre. I didn't want her to be Hawaiian. I want her to be sort of no nationality.
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 4:36pm EST
*sigh* I'd kill for a comment editor. I meant "I" don't hate the name. (It rubs the lotion on its skin...)
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kelldogg ! Feb 24, 2009, 4:39pm EST
I think I'm going to have to be a benchwarmer with E.M. and marvel at your works from the sidelines. Imagery through written word is not my forte. Now, hand me a brush, paint and canvas and I can whip you up my alter in a day or two! Your challenge sounds great though and I'm eager to read what others submit! Best of luck to you all.
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 4:40pm EST
I'm writing a novel now about a murder mystery in a church called Church Office. I think I want my secretary character for that one to not be IRRITATING, though.

(That one is really a Catholic and has gambling debt and other piles of "suspicious things" to keep hidden)

I know !!!

I want to be Diana Ross.
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Donna T. Feb 24, 2009, 4:44pm EST
I'm a very new writer. Is there a place for a new writer in this group to get *unbiased* help, or should I take my shoddy writing to another group?

There is a group for newbie writers here, and I asked for critiques, but never received them.
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 4:44pm EST
... a white man Diana Ross drag queen who is really a woman who is really black but she hides that and makes her life impossible because when she was little and Mom took her to see Victor/Victoria Mom blew too much dusted pot smoke in her face (and wouldn't let her use the bathroom).
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 4:46pm EST
Donna T. !!!! You know you want to be HERE and we are all FUN and I won't notice your typos if you don't notice mine !!!
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 4:47pm EST
>and I asked for critiques

Maybe you were just fine and there was nothing "wrong" to point out
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Jean E. Feb 24, 2009, 4:48pm EST
Barbara C ~ how about L-Shae and the dash is not silent? ~

I'm not the creative type ~ nor do I ever know how much time and effort I'd be able to commit ~ but will be listening and helping when/where I can ~j

Sandy is working and in is charge of a game of sorts ~ has the world gone wonkers?
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Lynn, whose writing motto is Tabula rasa - Caveat lector Feb 24, 2009, 4:48pm EST
OK, I'm game! But, ummmm, still lost on Gathers. Last time I tried publishing an article, I never could get it actually published, soooooo, here are related questions to this game -

1. Where are the instructions on how to post an article, again?

2. Has it gotten easier in the last 2-3 years?

3. How do I get this magical post (magical, if I can actually publish the thing) into view for this group?

4. Why does the character need to be a person, with a nationality, or a weight, or belong to a class, or even have hair or skin? Some characters simply don't belong in reality!

5. Any length limits?

6. Is this character simply a written visual, or does he/she/it get to have some backgroud for rounding out the visual?

7. I'm assuming this character gets to do something in a story, eventually. Can we dig into the psyche so there is some concept where this character will or won't fit into stories - whether our own or others? If I'm creating a fictional character, given my personal preferences, there are some stories that I just don't want my character to show up in. Ummm, am I already getting writer snootiness?! ;)
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Kerry Dexter Feb 24, 2009, 4:49pm EST
sandy,
came over to see what you were planning with the writing essential. and though it's been a while since I've written fiction, while I was reading your instructions, a character just walked in to my imagination...
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Katie Scarlett (Site Bouncer Wanna Be) O. Feb 24, 2009, 4:50pm EST
I'm with Robiyah. I'll watch and see. It sounds like fun.
Congrats on being asked to be an Editor. I do think you are perfect for such a task.
Notice I did not say job which is too much like the 'w' word.
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Lynn, whose writing motto is Tabula rasa - Caveat lector Feb 24, 2009, 4:56pm EST
Donna, Does new writer group really work? I'm trying to get published now - and don't know how yet. I already know how much I don't know, so hanging out with a bunch of people, who also know so little, really doesn't seem too helpful to me. I would think a group of seasoned writers, noobs, and a whole bunch of writers in-between, seem like a better approach. I'm hoping this group is such a group. I figure, at worst, this will force me to do what I need to do to become a better writer - WRITE! Can't lose joining in on this - can we?
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Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 24, 2009, 5:01pm EST
"4. Why does the character need to be a person, with a nationality, or a weight, or belong to a class, or even have hair or skin? Some characters simply don't belong in reality!"

Yeah, like Diana Ross !!!
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Sheryl O. Feb 24, 2009, 5:04pm EST
Sounds like fun, Sandy. I'll be thinking of something over the next few days. Might wait it out like Robi, just to see if my writing is up to par with the other submissions. I know, I know...what a chicken! Well, I know your standards, woman!

BTW - I think you're going to be wonderful at this job.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 5:06pm EST
JustMe, it would be great to see Rachel here! (And to have you around for back-up)

Barbara, what do you think about Launa?

Kellogg, maybe you can direct the scenery? That’s where I need the most help.

Peter, what fun is a character who isn’t irritating?

Donna, there’s a place for everyone in this group. Welcome! Critique is a crucial part of the Writing Essential group that has been ignored. My goal is to have this group show everyone else how helpful it can be when we’re all looking out for each other. The deal – you point out my errors and typos, and tell me how you think I might improve my work, and I’ll do the same for you.

Jean, I don’t believe you aren’t creative. Shy, maybe. Stick around – we need you.

Caroline – I’ll get back to you.

Kerry, that’s music to my ears (okay, editors, tell me how cliché that statement is). Welcome – to you and that character that just walked in.

Katie, thanks for not using that ‘w’ word. Stick around and jump in whenever and however you want.
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Jean E. Feb 24, 2009, 5:08pm EST
btw ~ Barbara C ~ you character must speak with a Non-English accent ~ for the "-" to work ~ I don't know your definition of exotic ~ so, can't help you there ~j
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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Feb 24, 2009, 5:16pm EST
Jean: I think I'll go just a shade less exotic. I want her to blend in physically and only be interesting by her behavior and what she says.
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Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 24, 2009, 5:17pm EST
Caroline,

Where