by Ratandeep Satwant Singh
Member since:
December 31, 2008

Senryū #1

February 18, 2009 12:25 PM UTC (Updated: February 20, 2009 09:30 PM UTC)
views: 0 | comments: 36

Eight Olympic golds,

A puff of cannabis

Spoiled the bliss

 

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Comments: 36

Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Feb 18, 2009, 12:42pm UTC
Very good
Solskin Iam Feb 18, 2009, 12:42pm UTC
for every action there is a consequence.......no longer does my g'son call him his hero.....
Sheila J. Feb 18, 2009, 12:49pm UTC
True story!
cat live Feb 18, 2009, 12:50pm UTC
really?
Nikki S. Feb 18, 2009, 12:51pm UTC
Thanks for posting ~ Paying it forward
Holly K. Feb 18, 2009, 12:56pm UTC
Very good - and so sad!
What exactly is a senryu?
Kay M Feb 18, 2009, 1:59pm UTC
It certainly did. Good senryu.
Penny M. Feb 18, 2009, 2:05pm UTC
Thanks Comments
Thanks for sharing with us a Endless Points!!~
Nancy Biri Feb 18, 2009, 2:38pm UTC
Thanks for sharing
Darin Waugh Feb 18, 2009, 2:45pm UTC
Nice!
Jenysie Jane Feb 18, 2009, 3:09pm UTC
thanks for sharing!!
Sharon C. Feb 18, 2009, 3:11pm UTC
Yep! It sure did. Very good.
regina k. Feb 18, 2009, 4:01pm UTC
love this
mary bryant Feb 18, 2009, 5:26pm UTC
Yes it did
Elaine S. Feb 18, 2009, 5:53pm UTC
well said
Georgiana S. Feb 18, 2009, 7:01pm UTC
Good verse, I don't see the big deal though, if you do your 'job' what you do in private is your own concern.
Angela A. Feb 18, 2009, 7:44pm UTC
Wow, this is so cool!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Thank you ,for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

orkutwishes.com
Have a Great & powerful day W/J!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
charity kimball ツ Feb 18, 2009, 10:12pm UTC
thanks for sharing:)
Alison H. Feb 18, 2009, 11:24pm UTC
Good one
Shannon H. Feb 19, 2009, 1:07am UTC
A fine senryu, Ratan. I really admire the way you use different styles with your poetry. Keep 'em coming!! :)
Jim Ross Feb 19, 2009, 2:15am UTC
Good job, Ratan!
Kushal Poddar Feb 19, 2009, 7:35am UTC
Great job.
My friend …
Inside a T.V.
Larry M. Feb 19, 2009, 11:15am UTC
Sad.
Teresa A. Feb 19, 2009, 11:23am UTC
Good job. Too bad he didn't pick his friends better.
charity kimball ツ Feb 19, 2009, 3:23pm UTC
good one:)stopping in again to say hi
ELLEN B. Feb 19, 2009, 5:11pm UTC
I do not think this could have been said better..Ellen B
Ms Lee P. Feb 19, 2009, 7:32pm UTC
Well done. You told the whole story in these few words.

You're a success. How many times did you rewrite it?
Beth G. Feb 19, 2009, 8:47pm UTC
lol that is so certainly true for Michael Phelps. Well done!
Carol Roach Feb 20, 2009, 4:18am UTC
very good, poor phelps,
Dan R. Feb 21, 2009, 12:13am UTC
LOL
Someone that knows the difference between a Haiku and a Senryu.
Good job.
John Philipp Feb 27, 2009, 7:54am UTC
Excellently executed, Ratan.

Thanks.
Shelbia C. May 21, 2009, 8:46pm UTC

good job

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