The Hidden (Poem) (Critique Please)

Alright, this is the first assignment I wrote for my Poetic Forms class. It's based off of the Old English accentual poems, meaning they have 4 stressed syllables per line, but they can have as many unstressed as is necessary.

I'd really like critique on this seeing as how I need to turn it in tomorrow and I'm unsure about it. Some of the lines seem like some things might seem like they should be stressed when I didn't intend for them to be, so I wanted some opinions on that.

So, just let me know what you think. Thanks. :D

The Hidden

I am the shadow shifting through your sullen thoughts;

Follow fearlessly this shamed, forgotten soul.

Was it just a whisper washing over you that moved

Music to melt into your melancholy mind?

I am the fog fearlessly infecting you forever—

You’re listlessly lost within me, looking for a lighthouse.

Can’t come across one, can you, dear?

Still out there searching, searching for—something.

I am a sordid sigh, stolen from someone’s lips.

I am not just a nugatory name—I am you.