by Chana M.
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June 6, 2008

As The Lambs That Roam Through The Glen - For Karen E.

February 14, 2009 04:55 PM EST (Updated: June 07, 2009 05:08 PM EDT)
views: 106 | rating: 10/10 (14 votes) | comments: 23

Daughter, Sister, Mother
Your calm eases my heart.
Your soul the receptacle of alluring beauty,
welcomes me in at the sound of hello.
You ride the rough rivers,
never deterring you from your golden course,
sharing your luminescence.
The tone of your aura,
the tune of your aura,
replicates exponentially.
For each person you touch,
two reap the rewards of your sweet bounty.
Many such as me,
sequestered in a cocoon of safety,
are mesmerized by your soft words,
the quiet stillness of your presence.
As with the lambs who roam through the glen,
peace comes with you.

© JACM 14 February 2009

 

There are several things my brain told me to write about, but they are not cooperating. This just wrote itself. It is for someone, I hope they like it.
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Comments: 23

.* Sandi * Feb 14, 2009, 5:14pm EST
very nice Chana
Jennifer Lee Feb 14, 2009, 5:16pm EST
Beautiful tribute. I'm sure the recipient with adore this poem. It's filled with unconditional love and flows as a song would. Great job Chana! Thank you for posting to our group.
B.B. B. Feb 14, 2009, 5:19pm EST
this is a very nice one, thanks
Vic Needs Coffee Feb 14, 2009, 5:22pm EST
Very nicely done.
Karen E. Feb 14, 2009, 6:07pm EST
Chana, this is lovely beyond any words I can find. My hand is to my heart in awe. Such a peace accompanies the words and the image. It is just heavenly and earthly at once. Blessings to you for this dear, dear work.
Christy F. Feb 14, 2009, 6:09pm EST
very nicely done! Very lovely! :)
Christy F. Feb 14, 2009, 6:11pm EST
YOU'VE BEEN FEATURED TODAY! :)

Thanks for posting to Post it !
Connie C. Feb 14, 2009, 6:18pm EST
This was excellent
Dame Ruth, Chief Executive Elitist D. Feb 14, 2009, 7:55pm EST
Thank you for posting to this group whose only purpose is to thank you for posting to this group.
That was lovely, thank you for sharing it with The Commune
Peace and HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
debra g. Feb 14, 2009, 11:49pm EST
Wonderful work!I'm sure they will love it!
Have a great gather day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for posting to sparealine.gather.com
Kathryn E. Feb 15, 2009, 1:55am EST
Wonderful work.
Austin Cushing Feb 15, 2009, 2:16pm EST
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Angela A. Feb 15, 2009, 4:28pm EST
I just love poems that write themselves!
Now, if my hands did the dishes without me, that would be a wondrous thing!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
MrsRoad Runner Feb 15, 2009, 6:14pm EST
Right on!
Hope they like it too ;0)
MrsRoad Runner Feb 15, 2009, 6:14pm EST
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DIANE D. Feb 15, 2009, 6:46pm EST
Wonderful poem~
Amy just hangin' out M. Feb 15, 2009, 9:23pm EST
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Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 19, 2009, 1:04pm EST
Lovely, Chanochka, dear! :-)

Shalom veahava - S.
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 19, 2009, 1:05pm EST
- yes, lovely !!!
Dame Ruth, Chief Executive Elitist D. Mar 3, 2009, 5:12pm EST
Thank you for posting to this group whose only purpose is to thank you for posting to this group.
Melanie B. Mar 3, 2009, 9:58pm EST
Thank you for sharing.
Gene P. Mar 27, 2009, 12:44am EDT
Thanks for posting your content to the group Whatever!

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