by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'
Member since:
April 25, 2007

Warm up my heart~ Warmth/Valentine's Special/Poetry Please

February 10, 2009 03:09 PM EST
views: 135 | rating: 10/10 (25 votes) | comments: 51

I am not a dream
but fantasy of broken boundaries
nurture my transgression
rather than reviled. 

Life breathes
when I suck in air
a tethered prey still waits
to be killed bare.

Drenched sanity
holding black desires
break this harmony
as charisma fuels the fire.

Patience had overruled
scratching the last crust
come caress endlessly
inflame the thirst.

Shoot out the edicts
taste a era of crime
awaiting for the magic of blood that strikes
my hibiscus in red and pearls in lime.

Testing times on the royal bed
savoring the recipe of madness
freezing as true blue stones
savoring moments of moment.

Waiting, wanting, expecting, demanding
peeping through the opposite ends of the spectrum
me clutching your white crispy shirt
warm up my heart;keep mum.

 

 

 

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Comments: 51

Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 10, 2009, 3:11pm EST
That is a beautiful poem and work of art !!!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 3:12pm EST
Thank you so much, Peter...
Sheila J. Feb 10, 2009, 3:14pm EST
Wonderfully done! Thanks for sharing!
Kay M. Feb 10, 2009, 3:20pm EST
Wow! This is a wild one. "savoring the recipes of madness" Love it! Love the beautiful photo too.
David W. Feb 10, 2009, 3:26pm EST
So nice Buzzy.

" Drenched sanity
holding black desires
break this harmony
as charisma fuels the fire."

The sparks of flame dwell in your heart.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 3:30pm EST
Thanks,Sheila..

Hey Kay...ha ha...a wild day!!!


Thanks,David...season for spilling the beans...lol
JOHN BECK Feb 10, 2009, 3:33pm EST
Bewitching art, both graphic and poetic, buzz. You're on top of your form it seems. (And who is more charismatic than Bhawana?)
Marge H. Feb 10, 2009, 3:36pm EST
Love the poem and the graphic. Great job on both, Bhawana!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 3:36pm EST
I am in love with your first line...!!! John!!! yes, you're right... 15th my 7th wedding anniversary so already in a good form..all set to bother my Valentine...;)

Thank you so much.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 3:36pm EST
Hey Dear Marge...thanks for the lovely words...
KC Klein Feb 10, 2009, 3:54pm EST
intense stuff
Marianne R. Feb 10, 2009, 4:33pm EST
Nice
Natalie Neal Whitefield Feb 10, 2009, 4:57pm EST
You are warming up our hearts, Bhawana!
elizabeth e. Feb 10, 2009, 5:04pm EST
Cupid is on the loose....that's all I can say.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 5:10pm EST
Thanks,Karl, Marianne, Natalie and Bob.
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Feb 10, 2009, 5:50pm EST
This is a passionate, artistic one - great stuff!
David P. Feb 10, 2009, 6:55pm EST
Lots of urgency here. Energy pushing one line to the next. Quite a spontaneous association of high impact words and phrases. Beyond warmth and well nigh unto heat.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 7:09pm EST
Thanks,Stacey and thank you David...love well nigh unto heat;)
Jim Ross Feb 10, 2009, 7:11pm EST
Well, Geeta Buzzy, when you set out to get warm you really build the fire! I love the way you used colors to emphasize ranges of heat and desire. Good stuff!
William Dotani Feb 10, 2009, 7:53pm EST
Quite sensuous. I shall be back to read this. I'm rather tired now.
Kathryn E. Feb 10, 2009, 7:57pm EST
Featured in the Triple Name Club.
Lisa Frost Feb 10, 2009, 8:30pm EST
wonderful write!! well done my friend!
Rose (just an ole GA peach) Williams Feb 10, 2009, 8:50pm EST
Woot for You!! You have some serious poetry going on here dear Bhawana. I feel the heat!
Jan S. Feb 10, 2009, 9:03pm EST
Absolutely awesome poem and art! You are so talented!

Thanks for posting to Absolutely Everything Winter
Angela A. Feb 10, 2009, 9:16pm EST
Awe inspiring!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Larry H. Feb 10, 2009, 9:23pm EST
thanks for sharing
Kushal Poddar Feb 10, 2009, 10:12pm EST
It is out of this world. Here, amid our friends we read so many good poems still it is exceptional. And, perhaps a bit dark too.

Sunrise Tea Stall
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 10, 2009, 10:32pm EST
Thanks,Jim,William,Kathryn,Lisa,Rose,Jan,Angela,Larry and Poddar.
Elsie Duggan Feb 10, 2009, 10:45pm EST
Wow, Bhawana, wonderful writing and art, I think we have seen serious talent here tonight, Bless you.
Alison H. Feb 11, 2009, 12:55pm EST
This is going to take more than one reading from me to absorb it all. Wow!
Ratan . Feb 11, 2009, 10:16pm EST
Nice one!
Vinay Benjamin Feb 12, 2009, 2:29am EST
It just jumped off the web page and "whooosh" - left me breathless Bhawana
The opening line is just amazing
"I am not a dream
but fantasy of broken boundaries"

delicious . . . .
necee t. Feb 12, 2009, 2:54pm EST
wow, Bhawana... this is sooo powerful... very great job... love you...
Purple Hearts Pictures, Images and Photos
Dr. Ashok Saxena Feb 12, 2009, 3:46pm EST
Ur more than my dream. Iam on the verge of extinction and dream through my daughter who is a great crative personKeep it up well done simply superb
donna h. Feb 12, 2009, 8:21pm EST
You are very good
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 13, 2009, 9:05am EST
very luscious and vividly striking verse !!

Lovely read on love lorn buzzy bee !!!
Barbary Chaapel Feb 13, 2009, 10:31pm EST
I'm reading here a different kind of poetry from you, Bhawana:

"a tethered prey still waits
to be killed bare."

Very dramatic, especially with the art work. Love that last line!
Rae M. Feb 14, 2009, 11:03am EST
Well done poem, an very interesting photo as well.
Tracey W. Feb 15, 2009, 12:47pm EST
So full of dangerous imagery. I think the pair is breaking some taboo perhaps. In any event, you lead up to it with such savagery almost. I like the way you begin and end your piece, I am not a dream/but fantasy of broken boundaries and me clutching your white crispy shirt/warm up my heart;keep mum. Very well done!
tammy b. Feb 15, 2009, 3:41pm EST
very good
Sheila Deeth Feb 15, 2009, 7:19pm EST
Lovely pictures and some stunning, beautiful words. Congratulations.
Kathy W. Feb 16, 2009, 7:15am EST
Completely beautiful--the urgency builds throughout the whole piece. This is love, and anticipation, need and trust, in technicolor! You and your life partner, blessed indeed.
"warm up my heart;keep mum."
Absolutely perfect.
And Happy Anniversary!
Wilka
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 16, 2009, 7:39am EST
Congratulations dear one !

You are passionate so I relent to make

appeal-urge for a 'Lover's Paradise Park' exclusively

for the Indian folk like you pulsating-impulse to

breaking boundaries in love, from the very beginning

etched on my profile's wishlist priorities - a dream

project to be realized act-worth !!!
Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 18, 2009, 2:16am EST
Absolutely wonderful, sweet Bhawana, and such a well-deserved honor - congratulations! :-)

Love and hugs - S.
Amy C. Feb 18, 2009, 1:37pm EST
gorgeous... painted words
Shannon W Feb 18, 2009, 1:39pm EST
So beautiful....
Shelbia C. Feb 18, 2009, 4:53pm EST
What a wonderful poem!
Donald M. Feb 18, 2009, 5:03pm EST
Really a mixture of emotions . Well done my friend
Vikki M. Feb 18, 2009, 5:29pm EST
Awesomely beautiful!
Barbra L. Feb 21, 2009, 12:45pm EST
"peeping through the opposite ends of the spectrum"... I love this line, Geeta! It beautifully defines the range of intimacy w/in your content.
William Dotani Feb 22, 2009, 4:10pm EST
The first stanza is simply great. Yes, we all transgress and wish to be forgiven or told all is okay with a wish to be loved unconditionally no matter our faults. Each stanza says fill my desires and think not about my transgressions, in very sensuous language.

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