SEX GAME.

Painting by Jack Vettriano. poem by me and my Muse.

A job well done.

Hmm this was very interesting like the picture though.Not sure I quite understood alot of it but maybe that she cheated?

Nice poem

Ah, lovely Terry.
I've always thought you could do very well writing erotica.

the ruse muse between the sexes, evocative spinerette you've created here, spicy; the style is interesting and demands deeper levels of comprehension, very well done =)

Betrayal and dishonesty
between imagined sheets
lonely but creating

Betrayal and dishonesty
between real sheets,
dying and killing
more alone

Eternal "fidelity", a marriage lost or drowning in
the sea of aloneness under the same roof is
betrayal

The pain of soul death eased, maybe even healed
through artful expression
shared and inspired

creatively brilliant

You've done this Terry, again

I do not necessarily agree or condemn the woman's actions here. I am just the messenger.

thank you for sharing

Excellent poem.

Terry,
You've been my messenger in quite a number of arenas over the last few months. From dealing with tragic deaths, and other's drug and sex addictions, sad and misguided human behavior.

You've guided me towards kneeling on the cold, hard stone floors in the church of a foreign god and brought me the closest I've ever been to my first glimmer of understanding behind that whole story. Onto understanding all flavors of human sexuality and neglect and abuse, denial and lonely demise.

You've been one of the messengers from soul school for me this year Terry, a really important class in how to begin to express some of this bizarrely complicated stuff. And I will be forever grateful for your high level of creative responsibility and accountability.

You've been my muse. I hope I've not misunderstood your artful offers and taken with out returning something from my own knowledge of life.

Now, I may have gained the courage to try and write my own stories after your incredible outpouring. I've promised my Poppa I'll try. What have you got on borderline incest? I've been hoping, but not sure how to ask and still too close to have the distance necessary.

(also if this should not be attached as a comment, please ping or mail me a thumbs down and I'll be quite understanding about removing it. Your work provokes response in arenas many are terrified to respond too. I've haven't been able to not respond. But also, I'm still unknowing about much here, this thinness between public and private spaces)

Thanks for sharing. You too, adrian.

Good job

Thank you ,for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Have a Great & powerful day W/J!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the intracasies of the human condition

Cheating for revenge. Ain't it lovely?

You know your game.

That man in the flood =

Good one!

Thank you ,for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Jesus Love You Too!!!!!

Thank you for sharing Terry. Your poems have a raw intensity that evoke a gut-level reaction.

Once again, very well done.

Excellent!