Is it that you think me a lightweight?
Standing in the ring,
the arena almost empty,
I still fight the fight,
I must fight it,
there is no choice in the matter,
it is not for fame or glory that I fight,
it is for a lonely impulse of delight.*
Is it my right hook or
my left jab that fails to retain,
your interest in my career?
The fans abandoned for a newer,
a younger fighter.
Does that one please you so much better?
Is their presence more lyrical?
Is their stance more harmonious?
Does their swiftness of motion,
fill you with the poetry you desire?
I gather you grow tired of me.
One day my career may rise again,
rise like the phoenix,
I will float and fly,
with power and joy.
You will see me as I am.
Not as a lightweight,
but as a contender.



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But I always read into poems............smile.
Great write, Chana.
Regards,
Vinay
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First of all, I like the piece. It is very real, very sincere.
I feel like there are some ideas (e.g: rising like a phoenix) in this that are a bit overused in the creative world. Personally, I try to stay away from stock symbolism for the most part. I think it helps to create a piece that is more personal to you, and shows your individuality off better.
"Is their presence more lyrical?" :O) That is a beautiful line. And overall, I like this piece alot. :O)
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