by Ratan .
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December 31, 2008

Haiku #5

February 04, 2009 12:31 PM EST (Updated: February 19, 2009 12:08 PM EST)
views: 198 | comments: 33

Kaleidoscopic leaf:
ripple in lake; scarecrow
stands unperturbed

 

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Comments: 33 ( 1 removed by Ratan . )

Cheryl W. Feb 4, 2009, 12:38pm EST
Nice haiku!
peggy g. Feb 4, 2009, 12:40pm EST
nice .
Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Feb 4, 2009, 1:06pm EST
You can picture this in your mind if you think about it.

This is a faithful saying, and worthy of all acceptation, that Christ Jesus came into the world to save sinners.~I Timothy 1:15, a-c
Sandra H. Feb 4, 2009, 1:14pm EST
Very nice Ratan! I like this one!
*LORA* M. Feb 4, 2009, 1:15pm EST
great!
Alison H. Feb 4, 2009, 1:25pm EST
Lonely and lovely
Teresa A. Feb 4, 2009, 1:54pm EST
Nice work
JoAnne D. Feb 4, 2009, 2:12pm EST
I like that, it's a good one for harvest time.
Angela A. Feb 4, 2009, 3:46pm EST
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Nancy Biri Feb 4, 2009, 3:54pm EST
Nice
Linda T. Feb 4, 2009, 7:02pm EST
Nice
Rachel W. Feb 4, 2009, 8:13pm EST
nice
Kushal Poddar Feb 4, 2009, 10:00pm EST
I think it is your best till this day.
My friend,

art of heartbreaking
Shannon H. Feb 5, 2009, 12:10am EST
Very nicely done!
Austin Cushing Feb 5, 2009, 2:36pm EST
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Vivian A. Feb 6, 2009, 12:25am EST
Lovely imagery.
ELLEN B. Feb 6, 2009, 6:01am EST
I agree with Poddar> The imagery in this one is excellent. I love the scarecrow in this, How unexpected and what a part of life. It is often the things that we do not often think of that make words stand out, and our brains work. I am inspired by the these simple yet complex lines.. Very well done from my point of view.. Kudos.. Ellen B
Nick B. Feb 6, 2009, 6:59am EST
that's was really nice.
Teresa A. Feb 6, 2009, 9:53am EST
I can see the lake but only in my mind cause our's is frozen!
Sharon P. Feb 6, 2009, 11:42am EST
Nice.
Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Feb 6, 2009, 12:28pm EST
Nice one
**AngelEyez** a. Feb 6, 2009, 3:23pm EST
Very nice!
Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Feb 6, 2009, 3:26pm EST
What style of haiku is this?
Nora Davenport Feb 6, 2009, 4:46pm EST
Very interesting!
Georgiana S. Feb 6, 2009, 5:42pm EST
and...?
Beth G. Feb 8, 2009, 1:53pm EST
This was very nice, thanks for sharing!
theresa s. Feb 8, 2009, 5:07pm EST
thanks for sharing
Rachel W. Feb 9, 2009, 11:04am EST
very nice
Shelbia C. Feb 11, 2009, 8:31pm EST
wonderful
regina k. Feb 12, 2009, 8:25pm EST
nice
stacy k. Feb 15, 2009, 11:53am EST
Good job, reading this you can feel fall in the air. Thanks.
F. Jeanette c. Feb 16, 2009, 12:56am EST
powerful

10 4 u
Sharon C. Feb 18, 2009, 3:19pm EST
I loved it.

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