by Peter Joseph Swanson
Member since:
April 13, 2007

My Gather Poem

February 02, 2009 03:21 PM EST
views: 58 | comments: 49

Woot, Yay, and a 10 from me,

I'll pray for you

ha ha, chat with me

100 more points

Gift card shopping spree

The content is deep

no time to pee

 

Peter Joseph Swanson

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Comments: 49

Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:21pm EST
yep
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:22pm EST
I nailed it ...
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:22pm EST
*bows*
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:22pm EST
You ho.

But at least you're open about it, LOL!
ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 3:26pm EST
No time to pee? Your poor darling!!!
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:27pm EST
hey ... it rhymes !!!

(but I forgot to put a line in the poem about being a ho !!!!)
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:27pm EST
There is ALWAYS time to pee.
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:27pm EST
Well, EDIT, baby, EDIT!!
ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 3:27pm EST
And not even a pic in this!!!
ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 3:28pm EST
The "ho" should have been in the title. We have come to expect that of you!!
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:33pm EST
Gather inspires me.
Denise C. Feb 2, 2009, 3:35pm EST
point for you
Denise C. Feb 2, 2009, 3:36pm EST
and another. . .
Denise C. Feb 2, 2009, 3:36pm EST
and another because its Groundhog day.
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:38pm EST
I've seen this day before.
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:38pm EST
This poem has deep sociological implications !!!!

It should be printed out in Readers Digest !!!
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:40pm EST
It's too short for Reader's Digest. It has to be longer so they can abridge it.
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:40pm EST
But this poem is a new one !!! All brand spanking new. And I didn't even write it in WORD first. I composed it all on Gather.
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:40pm EST
Your feelings are so deep that I have instinctively lifted my feet up off the floor to protect myself from their intensity.
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:41pm EST
Woot,

Yay,

and

a 10


(the Readers Digest version)
Tracy Fabre Feb 2, 2009, 3:41pm EST
LOL -- perfect!!
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:43pm EST
It's Gather Zen.

All it needs is wind chimes.
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:43pm EST
(or maybe just wind)
Melanie B. Feb 2, 2009, 3:46pm EST
Congrats!

ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 3:50pm EST
It's deep ok, but it isn't the feelings!!!

Wind chimes would be nice!!!
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 3:54pm EST
I should write for Hallmark. They would print me on very absorbent Poise paper ...
Maggie Y. Feb 2, 2009, 3:55pm EST
LOL nice :)
Marianne R. Feb 2, 2009, 3:59pm EST
I thought you only needed 5 points earlier. Did you miscount? lol
Janet "Jax" B. Feb 2, 2009, 4:05pm EST
LOL...cute Peter...
ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 4:09pm EST
Then why don't you write for Hallmark? Do they have Happy Ground Hog Day cards? If not you could do those!!!
ann c. Feb 2, 2009, 4:14pm EST
Don't raise a fuss,
Don't pull your hair
Be glad it's a groundhog
And not a bear!!!
William Dotani Feb 2, 2009, 4:46pm EST
What will happen to Minnesota lakes if you don't pee?
Mark Jepsen Feb 2, 2009, 4:50pm EST
Pee waits for no man...
Peter Joseph Swanson Feb 2, 2009, 5:25pm EST
I came back to see how I've brought joy to so many people ...
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Feb 2, 2009, 5:28pm EST
Woo Hoo Peter's a poet now!!
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Feb 2, 2009, 5:28pm EST
You've brought joy into my life today just in admiring your Valentine's chapeau. ;)
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Feb 2, 2009, 5:29pm EST
Good Luck on your points whoring today!
donna h. Feb 2, 2009, 6:59pm EST
popping in peter
M & M. Feb 2, 2009, 7:48pm EST
Hehheehe, love it Peter.
Cindy B. Feb 3, 2009, 2:12am EST
Happy! Happy! Joy! Joy! =)
Courtney C. Feb 4, 2009, 3:35pm EST
lol
Curt L. Feb 5, 2009, 12:19pm EST
How fun!
Cortney R. Feb 7, 2009, 9:42pm EST
Interesting.
Elsie Duggan Feb 8, 2009, 7:32pm EST
What can I say to this one Peter, Peter the Great?
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Feb 8, 2009, 7:35pm EST
:-)
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Feb 10, 2009, 3:35pm EST
I don't have time to pee either.

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