by Lisa Frost
Member since:
April 24, 2007

Love, Inspired by Ny Tasha

February 01, 2009 02:53 PM EST
views: 97 | comments: 36

 

love is a journey

through space and time

and running from it

is a mortal crime

 

it is not love

that brings endless pain

but those who reject it

again and again

 

don't give up on it

it's just around the door

or that next corner

you can not be sure

 

if a chance you take

you will surely find

a true love fulfilling

your heart and mind!

 

 

You can read the poem that inspired this write by clicking on the link- where is US? | Gather

 

Ny Tasha is a very talented poet that I was directed to read by Spencer T.  I love her work and highly recommend it to others!

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Comments: 36

Brian T. Feb 1, 2009, 2:57pm EST
Very well written, good expression. Even my own Mom used to say "Life is a risk" we all have got to chance things in life to fully live it.
Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 1, 2009, 2:58pm EST
Brilliantly, put, dear Lisa! ;-)

Hugs and blessings - S.
Vivian P. Feb 1, 2009, 3:00pm EST
beautiful poem
Chris E. Feb 1, 2009, 3:03pm EST
Very nice Lisa!
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Feb 1, 2009, 3:13pm EST
Lovely poem.
Kim B. Feb 1, 2009, 3:14pm EST
very nice
Janis V. Feb 1, 2009, 3:24pm EST
very very nice.
tammie p. Feb 1, 2009, 3:26pm EST
thank you for sharing this
Vic Needs Coffee Feb 1, 2009, 3:35pm EST
Very nice.
karen h. Feb 1, 2009, 3:48pm EST
very nice words
Angela A. Feb 1, 2009, 3:49pm EST
I'm very impressed! Lovely words from a lovely lady!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Jennifer Lee Feb 1, 2009, 4:33pm EST
I concur and am so glad that I made the leap. This poem resonates to my core. Thank you for posting to our group!
Danielle P. Feb 1, 2009, 4:48pm EST
Very Nicely done!!
Elaine S. Feb 1, 2009, 5:17pm EST
Very Nice
Deb J. Feb 1, 2009, 5:35pm EST
This is beautiful Lisa!! Thank you for sharing!!
JOHN BECK Feb 1, 2009, 5:44pm EST
Taking a chance? "You gotta know when to hold 'em...."
Jim Ross Feb 1, 2009, 8:00pm EST
Lovely sentiment, Lisa.
Donald M. Feb 1, 2009, 8:48pm EST
Lovely statement she made.
Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer Feb 1, 2009, 9:32pm EST
Nice, Lisa. Simply written, but a huge message. I like that.
William Dotani Feb 1, 2009, 11:08pm EST
A lovely message within lines holding gentle rhyme.
Alison H. Feb 2, 2009, 12:29am EST
Your poem expresses a great truth. Well-penned, Lisa!
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Feb 2, 2009, 10:01am EST
Great sentiment and rhythm, I really enjoyed this one Lisa
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Feb 2, 2009, 11:15am EST
Oh, so true!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 2, 2009, 12:09pm EST
adorable and lovely sentiments.
Sharon C. Feb 2, 2009, 12:52pm EST
This is very true. wonderful Poem
NyTasha M. Feb 2, 2009, 5:03pm EST
thank you for your feedback it is greatly appreciated along with the other readers you've sent to read my work thank you!!!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Feb 3, 2009, 3:17am EST
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William Dotani Feb 3, 2009, 3:33am EST
I reread this. The words are comfortingly positive.
Kushal Poddar Feb 3, 2009, 6:29am EST
Great work, comforting.
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Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Feb 3, 2009, 9:28pm EST
I really like this, Lisa.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Feb 6, 2009, 1:28am EST
Nice poem Lisa.
Missy Cline Feb 6, 2009, 5:10pm EST
love it!
Barbary Chaapel Feb 7, 2009, 9:03pm EST
Lisa, your first line is the start of a premise quite grand.
Sheila Deeth Feb 8, 2009, 1:12am EST
Lovely, real and positive.
Wilma M. Feb 9, 2009, 1:08pm EST
Very nicely done, Lisa.
Priscilla P. Feb 9, 2009, 10:43pm EST
Sounds good, real good, in fact but I am not so sure

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