by Nation !!!!
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September 11, 2007

Complete me...

January 28, 2009 11:52 PM EST (Updated: March 16, 2009 09:39 PM EDT)
views: 139 | rating: 10/10 (24 votes) | comments: 43

From day one I had fallen for this unfamiliar grace,

Butterflies, racing heart, all physical signs of something great,

Thinking of you every moment, needing with every second,

Never once realizing that it would be you, so simply to,

Complete me.

 

Key of my world so easily unlocked with a gentle turn,

Begining to flow through my veins, wrapping my soul,

Turning my mind towards the only vision I can see,

Never trying to resist the feeling, slowly you seem to,

Complete me.

 

I have waited for this invisable passion to take hold,

Guiding me closer to your amazing heart filled with love,

Filling the empty space that has consumed me for so long,

Crawling from my shell I realize this hole is filled because you,

Complete me.

 

Nation!!!!

 

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Comments: 43 ( 1 removed by Nation !!!! )

Katrena M. Jan 28, 2009, 11:53pm EST
nice job
Very Nice!!!!!!http://www.mybenefitsplus.com/40581105
Have A Great & Powerful Day W/J
Larry H. Jan 28, 2009, 11:56pm EST
THANKS FOR SHARING...
Nancy Biri Jan 29, 2009, 12:00am EST
Nice poem
karen h. Jan 29, 2009, 12:01am EST
wonderful poetry
sarah g. Jan 29, 2009, 12:02am EST
great poem...thanks for sharing. =)
Laurie R. Jan 29, 2009, 12:05am EST
Very nice Nation. I will go to sleep with those thoughts. Good night.
Lyn L. Jan 29, 2009, 12:10am EST
Very pretty! Deep.
Johnathan Rosson Jan 29, 2009, 12:20am EST
great
chelsie t. Jan 29, 2009, 12:30am EST
kool
Linda T. Jan 29, 2009, 12:41am EST
I love your romantic flair.
tomi r. Jan 29, 2009, 12:52am EST
Very pretty.
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 29, 2009, 1:25am EST
so beautiful
Susan Budig Jan 29, 2009, 1:59am EST
I like the repetiton, but not so sure about the sentiment. My mind goes back to that Zegweiller/Cruise flick. You keep a steady beat, Nation.
Sue T. Jan 29, 2009, 2:36am EST
Lovely. Nation, I like what you've done here. I agree with Susan ~ I like the repitition, I use it a lot in my own poems. I think your writing is getting better and better.
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 29, 2009, 7:13am EST
Thanks for sharing on Helping Out One Another
strongthrufight E. Jan 29, 2009, 7:21am EST
Your poetry is beautiful Nation
Deb J. Jan 29, 2009, 9:09am EST
Very nice my friend!!
Christine P. Jan 29, 2009, 9:49am EST
Wonderful poetry!
Courtney C. Jan 29, 2009, 1:52pm EST
Nice!
Carol P. Jan 29, 2009, 5:52pm EST
Awesome!
Marie J. R. Jan 29, 2009, 6:05pm EST
Warm, caring, wanting, beautiful,,,
Bless you my friend,,,


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Lisa Frost Jan 29, 2009, 6:12pm EST
lovely
Angela A. Jan 29, 2009, 6:16pm EST
This poem is completely awesome!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Bethany C. Jan 29, 2009, 6:44pm EST
Quite lovely! I enjoyed it.
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 29, 2009, 9:52pm EST
you do such a beautiful job with weaving words together
Elise w. Jan 29, 2009, 9:56pm EST
this one appears to have flowed straight from your heart and through your fingertips.
Good job, Nation. :-)
Shelbia C. Jan 29, 2009, 11:38pm EST
what a wonderful poem
Roger Kiser Jan 29, 2009, 11:47pm EST
This is well written and very well expressed. Just remember that DAD is the author in this family and your writing is getting so good that you might start making me look bad. (LOL)

Very proud of you son,

Dad
Amber C. Jan 30, 2009, 12:15am EST
Good job once again!
Glome . . . Jan 30, 2009, 4:52am EST
Very good poem Nation. All the way through I kept thinking ... just remember this after you've been married 10 years. Whatever it is you complete in each other, keep your eye on the joy and don't let daily cares cover it up :)
Jennifer R. Jan 30, 2009, 6:32am EST
I like the repetiton, but not so sure about the sentiment. My mind goes back to that Zegweiller/Cruise flick. You keep a steady beat, Nation.
Susan Budig, Jan 29, 2009, 1:59am EST

I agree. That is the same line of thinking I was on. I think everything before you state complete me is fantastic. I would have found another way to say - complete me
Wade A. Jan 30, 2009, 10:52am EST
I feel sure about the sentiment, I won't compare it to some Hollywood movie that probably has nothing to do with it, and I like the way you have set up each stanza to end with "Complete me".
Nice and sentimental in its proclamation.
Elizabeth Madrigal Feb 1, 2009, 1:59pm EST
To find someone to complete us and fill that void... beautifully expressed.
Kate Keeley Feb 1, 2009, 10:28pm EST
I enjoyed the passion and enthusiasm of the poem. I think a companion poem that gives us images of what completes this person would be interesting to read.
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 7:05am EST
it so nice when things come together
Joseph Breunig Feb 8, 2009, 9:53am EST
A lovely and sentimental piece; to have a soul-mate that compliments one's life can certainly make one "feel complete"; thanks for sharing this reminder. --Joe
Elaine S. Feb 12, 2009, 7:55pm EST
Beautiful Poem Nation
Janie E. Mar 4, 2009, 1:03am EST
Beautiful job, Nation! You should try and get your poems published!
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 1:00pm EDT
this one lovely
Misty W. Mar 17, 2009, 12:36am EDT
very romantic great job
Kushal Poddar Mar 17, 2009, 9:25am EDT
It is a good poem. Emotions are rightly placed.

Fear she feels
babsie wabsie Mar 23, 2009, 1:28pm EDT
beautiful

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