by Nation !!!!
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September 11, 2007

Mysterious one...

January 24, 2009 10:32 PM EST (Updated: March 16, 2009 09:41 PM EDT)
views: 109 | rating: 10/10 (31 votes) | comments: 39

So intrigued by the mysterious one,

Hiding behind such beautiful words,

Ducking inside a hard shell of pain,

Who can it be?

 

So truthful and straight forward,

Funny and kind at the same time,

Secretive words making minds wonder,

Who can it be?

 

One day revealing to the world,

Opening up self, soul and mind,

sharing all things worth sharing,

Who shall it be?

 

Nation !!!

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Comments: 39

charity kimball ツ Jan 24, 2009, 10:34pm EST
very nice thanks for sharing:)
Desiree T. Jan 24, 2009, 10:35pm EST
I always love your poems Nation.
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Jan 24, 2009, 10:38pm EST
How true - poets hide behind beautiful words. Good work.
Linda T. Jan 24, 2009, 10:48pm EST
Hiding behind one's poetry often encourages the poet to more freely share their work without recriminations.
Kimberly Ripley Jan 24, 2009, 10:49pm EST
Introspective!
Ashley Prince Jan 24, 2009, 11:08pm EST
Very nice poem. I love it! :) Thank you for sharing it! :)
Tamara L~will view, may comment~ S. Jan 24, 2009, 11:09pm EST
I loved the poem.
JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Jan 24, 2009, 11:11pm EST
It's a poem with a dual nature. On one hand the mysterious one could be one's self and on the other hand it could be someone else that you feel there is still so much to know.

Well-penned.
Larry H. Jan 24, 2009, 11:19pm EST
nice thanks for sharing
Becca J. Jan 24, 2009, 11:35pm EST
nice
I love your poetry!
Marie J. R. Jan 25, 2009, 12:01am EST
Once more my friend,,, well done,,, Bless you,,,
Akasha B. Jan 25, 2009, 12:03am EST
She must be some gypsy enchantress that has caught your eye that wove a web of words enough to intrigue, and to entice, an entire Nation...
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Have A Great & Powerful Day W/J
Po Dunk Jan 25, 2009, 12:48am EST
woohoo! I love a good mystery! I can hardly wait for the conclusion. This is exciting.
MrsRoad Runner Jan 25, 2009, 1:59am EST
Right on! ;0)
Lisa Frost Jan 25, 2009, 2:22am EST
interesting
Jamie Kiser Jan 25, 2009, 7:39am EST
nice poem
tammie p. Jan 25, 2009, 8:50am EST
very well written
kimberly g. Jan 25, 2009, 9:14am EST
sounds like someone I now. Hiding but bringing out the truth.
Elaine S. Jan 25, 2009, 9:15am EST
Very well done Nation
Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jan 25, 2009, 9:35am EST
Thanks You for sharing Nation.
Have a great day.
Terri V. Jan 25, 2009, 10:39am EST
Very nice
M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jan 25, 2009, 11:03am EST
You say so much cloaked in the aura of moving simplicity. Thank you.
Cheryl W. Jan 25, 2009, 1:05pm EST
A wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing!
Angela A. Jan 25, 2009, 7:12pm EST
I shall be the one to congratulate for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Hooray!
Paula C. Jan 25, 2009, 8:25pm EST
wondefully written

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rainne chandler Jan 25, 2009, 9:40pm EST
lovely nation very lovely
Elise w. Jan 25, 2009, 10:36pm EST
hmm...there are so many mysteries waiting to be solved. Next time I'll bring the popcorn. This is like Poetry Mystery Theater.
Penny M. Jan 26, 2009, 8:16pm EST
very good one lil brother
Shelbia C. Jan 29, 2009, 11:41pm EST
Well done
Gene P. Feb 1, 2009, 2:05pm EST
Thank you for posting your content to the group Whatever!
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 7:02am EST
very Mysterious........lol
Janie E. Feb 26, 2009, 12:10am EST
Beautifully written, Nation!
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:56pm EDT
just me making sure i havent missed any more of your posts
Misty W. Mar 17, 2009, 12:04am EDT
such a wonderful poem
Doris "Toadmama" Pearson Mar 17, 2009, 6:21pm EDT
It was very mysterious and quite interesting
Otelia S. Mar 17, 2009, 6:29pm EDT
Great!.,,,,,,,,as usual.
Ginger C. Mar 20, 2009, 11:57pm EDT
Well done! ;-)

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