by Nation !!!!
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September 11, 2007

Thats how I know...

January 24, 2009 06:01 PM EST
views: 88 | rating: 10/10 (20 votes) | comments: 32

The look that bursts from your star filled eyes,

Putting a trance on me with every passing moment,

Gazing straight into my heart to see my need,

Thats how I know.

 

Your smile which engulfs the room with joy,

Never ending happiness that grabs my soul,

The endless gleam from your lips asking me,

Thats how I know.

 

The passion that sings from your heart,

Communicating with mine without words,

Our love growing closer with each beat,

Thats how I know.

 

ηαтιση !!!

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Comments: 32

B.B. B. Jan 24, 2009, 6:04pm EST
that sounds really good, thanks for sharing
Beth G. Jan 24, 2009, 6:08pm EST
This was lovely and very very good! Thanks for sharing nation!
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 24, 2009, 6:11pm EST
Thanks for sharing on Helping out One another
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 24, 2009, 6:12pm EST
That is beautiful.. I really enjoyed this
Laurie R. Jan 24, 2009, 6:18pm EST
Oh, too remember that time when I felt that way. Thanks for sharing this Nation. Job well done.
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 24, 2009, 6:18pm EST
Beautiful poem
Kimberly L. Jan 24, 2009, 6:19pm EST
Very nice...
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 24, 2009, 6:31pm EST
Very nice.
Christy F. Jan 24, 2009, 6:35pm EST
Very nice!
Marianne R. Jan 24, 2009, 6:50pm EST
Nicely written
Po Dunk Jan 24, 2009, 7:08pm EST
that's how you know what? what do you know? And now you've left me hanging here kiserrogernation!!! Damn, I don't like raveled endings. Know why? they don't end! Is there a sequal to this story? How the hell am I supposed to sleep tonight if I don't hear the end of the story? Much less the plot! Ok, so the plot is that damn spell she put on you. ok...ok...I see where this is going now. I got it all figured out. No need to explain nothing. She done done you by casting a spell on you with her mesmerizing eyeballs that burned a hole in your heart and now you cant breathe or think about anything but her cause your in a trance.

well, kiserrogernation!!! 1 2 3...SNAP OUT OF IT!!! I need the ending!

you do have a way with your words. when they come out of your head they rhyme. that's a interesting talent.
Akasha B. Jan 24, 2009, 7:37pm EST
How smooth and fluid, your words... They tickled my ears, as I felt half ashamed overhearing such passionate lovers words; far too intimate, and seemingly unintended for others listening.
kimberly g. Jan 24, 2009, 7:37pm EST
Nation, you need to put all your poems in a book. I would buy it.
Love them.
Nation !!!! Jan 24, 2009, 7:40pm EST
I have my poems in a book but have not posted a link because I dont use Gather as an advertising site, If anyone wants the link you can send me a message. Thanks
Po Dunk Jan 24, 2009, 7:42pm EST
yeah, kiserrogernation!!! put your words in a book. a ebook! a digital book. a harper's romance novel book. better yet, put them in a song and make a video of you singing them to your woman! yeah, do that! do it! you could you know.
Angela A. Jan 24, 2009, 7:49pm EST
What I know is that you're super talented. Keep these poems coming!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Diane H. Jan 24, 2009, 9:03pm EST
Nice
Larry H. Jan 24, 2009, 9:58pm EST
nice thanks for sharing
tammie p. Jan 24, 2009, 11:44pm EST
beautiful
Marie J. R. Jan 24, 2009, 11:57pm EST
This, my friend is well done,,, thank you,,, Bless you,,,MyHotComments.com
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Steph-in-NE ..... Jan 25, 2009, 12:04am EST
very poetic I thank you for this have a great day my friend
Jamie Kiser Jan 25, 2009, 7:40am EST
nice poem
Christine P. Jan 25, 2009, 10:26am EST
I really enjoy reading your poems.
Courtney C. Jan 25, 2009, 7:04pm EST
Very sweet
rainne chandler Jan 25, 2009, 7:49pm EST
what a wonderful poem
Paula C. Jan 25, 2009, 8:26pm EST
lovely poem~!

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Penny M. Jan 26, 2009, 8:17pm EST
nice one
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 28, 2009, 1:58am EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful week!
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 7:00am EST
I think you have found a very special talent.....never stop writing
Janie E. Feb 25, 2009, 11:46pm EST
That's how you know you're in love! Romantic poem, Nation!
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:55pm EDT
just me making sure i havent missed any more of your posts

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