by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

Life with no you...

January 23, 2009 09:22 PM EST
views: 132 | rating: 10/10 (23 votes) | comments: 42

Life with no you, would be no life,

No sunshine for my day,

No stars in my nights,

I care not to see.

 

Life with no you, I feel pain always,

The light calls my name,

As I look away with grief,

I choose not to go.

 

Life with no you, I need time alone,

Let my tears flow in silence,

Nothing will mend me,

Forever your gone.

 

Life with no you, time is not helping,

I long for you every minute,

My heart will ever be crushed,

Until we meet again.

 

Nation!!!

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Comments: 42

karen h. Jan 23, 2009, 9:23pm EST
wonderful poem
Laurie R. Jan 23, 2009, 9:24pm EST
Thanks for sharing that Nation. What emotion you put in your words.
Tamara L~will view, may comment~ S. Jan 23, 2009, 9:25pm EST
Very nice poem.
Teresa T. Jan 23, 2009, 9:26pm EST
Very well written.
rainne chandler Jan 23, 2009, 9:26pm EST
what a wonderful peom and your heart is broken nation
nice flow tu
Kimberly Ripley Jan 23, 2009, 9:31pm EST
Very emotional.
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 23, 2009, 9:38pm EST
Very nice.
Larry H. Jan 23, 2009, 9:42pm EST
LOVE YOUR POEM THANKS FOR SHARING
Krystal Harwell Jan 23, 2009, 9:44pm EST
very nice and well written. thanks for sharing :)
Lori S. Jan 23, 2009, 9:45pm EST
Beautiful! i would dedicate that to my dear husband.
Lori F. Jan 23, 2009, 9:46pm EST
So sad.
Lynn R. Jan 23, 2009, 9:48pm EST
Sad and beautiful. I could almost hear it in song.
DesertDarlene L. Jan 23, 2009, 9:54pm EST
Oh, that's very nice.
Ashley Prince Jan 23, 2009, 9:54pm EST
Awww.... sad but sweet! :) I love this one!
kimberly g. Jan 23, 2009, 10:01pm EST
a strong love, that is.
Cindy B. Jan 23, 2009, 10:57pm EST
Sweet poem =)
Akasha B. Jan 23, 2009, 11:32pm EST
Wow Nation, very emotive and powerful. Such passion you put into your work.
Po Dunk Jan 23, 2009, 11:44pm EST
what do you mean til we meet again? i hadn't met you once yet...except maybe in your dreams. is that what youre talking about? you met me in your dreams? yeah, that happens a lot. guys are always telling me that. i seem to meet a lot of people in dreams. maybe one day they'll have the pleasure of meeting me for real. i like your dreamy poem. it made me crack a grin.
rainne chandler Jan 23, 2009, 11:50pm EST
lovely just lovely nation
Nancy S. Jan 23, 2009, 11:51pm EST
So nice. Those were the times.
Lexa Daily Jan 24, 2009, 12:11am EST
Fine expression of emotional loss. Well done Nation.
Becca J. Jan 24, 2009, 12:11am EST
great expression
Alisa Kerwood Jan 24, 2009, 12:14am EST
beautyful I loved it
Tanya P. Jan 24, 2009, 12:22am EST
Deeply and rawly expressed. Dredges up emotional experiences. Nicely done!
Christine P. Jan 24, 2009, 9:03am EST
A wonderfully written poem.
Cheryl W. Jan 24, 2009, 9:56am EST
Beautiful...I have felt just this way before.
*LORA* M. Jan 24, 2009, 12:33pm EST
good one
Nation you have put to prose a feeling I have each day.this is great
Christy F. Jan 24, 2009, 2:33pm EST
Very nice!
Angela A. Jan 24, 2009, 3:34pm EST
This poem is so amazing!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Cathi L. Jan 24, 2009, 5:29pm EST
That's so sad.
tammie p. Jan 24, 2009, 7:18pm EST
that was beautiful
Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Jan 25, 2009, 12:41pm EST
Beautifully written, full of emotion...great poetry friend.
Courtney C. Jan 25, 2009, 3:25pm EST
How sad
Paula C. Jan 25, 2009, 8:30pm EST
sad. great writing though!

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Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Jan 27, 2009, 9:43am EST
Very nice.

I think you meant "you're" not "your," though. Otherwise, very well done.
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 28, 2009, 1:17am EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful week!
Gene P. Feb 1, 2009, 1:46am EST
Thank you for posting your content to the group Whatever!
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 6:59am EST
so warm and fuzzy how you express yourself
Janie E. Feb 25, 2009, 9:04am EST
Sad, but beautiful poem, Nation!
Michael Harvey Feb 28, 2009, 2:40am EST
one nation under a groove

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