by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

Amazed...

January 21, 2009 08:06 PM EST
views: 103 | rating: 10/10 (23 votes) | comments: 43

The deep passion I see in your eyes,

Spills over my heart like waves from the sea,

The sun can't compare to the light you bestow in me,

And I'm amazed.

 

Your sigh brings new breath to my life,

Can't seem to break the chains of your love,

I'm so glad to be yours,

And I'm amazed.

 

The reason I open my eyes,

My purpose in this beautiful world,

These words can't seem to express,

And I'm amazed.

 

Everything I would give up for you,

Anything I'd give it all away,

You done done me,

And I'm amazed.

 

ηαтιση !!!

 

 

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Comments: 43

Akasha B. Jan 21, 2009, 8:09pm EST
The lover you wrote it for should be honored.
Mary M. Jan 21, 2009, 8:10pm EST
Wonderful!
Jessica S. Jan 21, 2009, 8:10pm EST
paying it f?rward t?day!
Kimmie X. Jan 21, 2009, 8:10pm EST
nice job nation...
Kris P. Jan 21, 2009, 8:14pm EST
I really enjoyed this one nation, keep writing.
Jamie Kiser Jan 21, 2009, 8:14pm EST
Love it baby
Cindy B. Jan 21, 2009, 8:16pm EST
Beautiful poem! =)
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 21, 2009, 8:21pm EST
Lovely.
Solskin Iam Jan 21, 2009, 8:22pm EST
i know how that feels......
David W. Jan 21, 2009, 8:23pm EST
and I am amazed by your prose.
tammie p. Jan 21, 2009, 8:26pm EST
what a beautiful poem
Lisa Madona U. Jan 21, 2009, 8:30pm EST
I think this one is the best yet!!!
Judy Kiser Jan 21, 2009, 8:33pm EST
I like this one very much.
Elizabeth B. Jan 21, 2009, 8:34pm EST
Nation, That was GREAT!!!
Lisa Frost Jan 21, 2009, 8:36pm EST
that is beautiful
Jessica Jene Jan 21, 2009, 8:41pm EST
Amazing :)
Dorothy H. Jan 21, 2009, 9:36pm EST
Nice job! Thanks for sharing!
jenn_ kitty Jan 21, 2009, 9:51pm EST
very beautiful
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 21, 2009, 10:43pm EST
Thanks for sharing on Helping out one another
Po Dunk Jan 21, 2009, 10:47pm EST
you done done me? what does that mean? done done? already done? Stick a fork in him! I think he's done done!

I'm amazed you're done done! Is this it it? There's no more more? I want more more!
Laurie R. Jan 21, 2009, 11:16pm EST
Nice one. Thanks for sharing it Nation.
Kimberly Ripley Jan 21, 2009, 11:24pm EST
Uplifting and refreshing.
Angela A. Jan 21, 2009, 11:50pm EST
I'm amazed by your poetry!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
kayze chayne Jan 22, 2009, 12:20am EST
Great!
Steph-in-NE ..... Jan 22, 2009, 12:36am EST
just great thanks for sharing
Gene P. Jan 22, 2009, 9:02am EST
Thank you for posting your content to the group Whatever!
♥♥LoViNg♥LiFe♥ ♥♥ Jan 22, 2009, 1:12pm EST
WOW! I can't breathe LOL
#1
Christine P. Jan 22, 2009, 1:52pm EST
A wonderfully written poem. I really like this.
Courtney C. Jan 22, 2009, 4:03pm EST
You have a wonderful muse
Elise w. Jan 22, 2009, 8:05pm EST
did this one make your wife cry? it's very good. :-)
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 23, 2009, 2:36am EST
very nice
rainne chandler Jan 23, 2009, 11:30am EST
another one for that book it was amazing thanks nation
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 23, 2009, 11:34am EST
Beautiful poem
Christine K. Jan 23, 2009, 5:10pm EST
Wow! That left me breatheless! Very nice Nation!
NoName *. Jan 23, 2009, 6:17pm EST
good poem
Paula C. Jan 23, 2009, 7:55pm EST
nice post.

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Kirstie Pederson Jan 23, 2009, 8:54pm EST
beautifull
Whew just open and raw true emotions can only be from one felt
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 28, 2009, 12:01am EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful week!
Joann Nicole Feb 3, 2009, 6:58am EST
beautiful
Janie E. Feb 20, 2009, 12:49am EST
Very romantic poem, Nation!!
Van N. May 11, 2009, 1:30pm EDT
Beautiful poem!

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