by Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~.
Member since:
November 12, 2007

Close your eyes and dream

January 21, 2009 05:06 PM UTC (Updated: January 22, 2009 10:34 AM UTC)
views: 0 | comments: 49

If days grow long,
Tears stream,
Know together we belong,
Close your eyes and dream.


When you long to be together,
The days are gleam,
If you don't know why to bother,
Close your eyes and dream.

 
Together will be soon,
It will never come it seems,
All you see is the moon,
Close your eyes and dream.

 
Soon in eachother arms,
The smiles will soon beam,
You are my good luck charm,
Close your eyes and dream

© 2009  S. Renee Hutchinson

Comments: 49

Vivian P. Jan 21, 2009, 5:08pm UTC
this is beautiful
Bridget Jean Jan 21, 2009, 5:09pm UTC
Nicely done!
Rae M. Jan 21, 2009, 5:20pm UTC
Very pretty, it is nice to see you back on here, I have not seen you here in a while.
David W. Jan 21, 2009, 5:21pm UTC
When I read this I do not have to close my eyes to dream. Thanks you.
Beverly T. Jan 21, 2009, 5:25pm UTC
Thanks for sharing this Renee!


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mindy a. Jan 21, 2009, 5:25pm UTC
Very pretty !
Danielle P. Jan 21, 2009, 5:26pm UTC
Wonderfully done.
Rhetta Akamatsu Jan 21, 2009, 5:28pm UTC
That's very sweet.
Kevin E. Jan 21, 2009, 5:39pm UTC
What a beautiful and heart touching poem!
Nancy Biri Jan 21, 2009, 6:11pm UTC
Lovely poem
Nancy S. Jan 21, 2009, 6:32pm UTC
This is so nice Renee. So glad you're able to write again.
Christy F. Jan 21, 2009, 7:29pm UTC
Very beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!
Sandi S. Jan 21, 2009, 8:20pm UTC
sweet!
Beth G. Jan 21, 2009, 8:36pm UTC
This was an amazing poem, thanks for sharing Renee!
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jan 21, 2009, 8:54pm UTC
Beautiful poem! Dreams can come true!
Georgiana S. Jan 21, 2009, 9:29pm UTC
very pretty Renee
Jan S. Jan 21, 2009, 10:48pm UTC
Wonderful. Life without dreams would be so dull.
Beth J. Jan 21, 2009, 10:53pm UTC
Thanks for posting on Getting to 3000 Together
Kimberly Ripley Jan 21, 2009, 11:27pm UTC
This is lovely!
Angela A. Jan 21, 2009, 11:28pm UTC
I love this poem very dearly!
Post it to my group, Anythingwriting
and I will approve it right away.
subroto s s. Jan 22, 2009, 12:07am UTC
Thanks, Renee. Great poem, my style!
Shelbia C. Jan 22, 2009, 1:04am UTC
This is a wonderful poem
Shannon H. Jan 22, 2009, 3:09am UTC
Very nicely done.
Marie J. R. Jan 22, 2009, 3:31pm UTC

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Well done and telling,,, Bless you,,,
Angela A. Jan 22, 2009, 7:51pm UTC
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
~~ Sarina ~~ Jan 22, 2009, 9:40pm UTC
This was very lovely. Big huggers to you.
Nick Howes Jan 23, 2009, 11:06am UTC
I'm giving you a 10 and a click towards your next cash-out.
Paula C. Jan 23, 2009, 1:12pm UTC
very nice as usual!
blaine d. Jan 23, 2009, 6:47pm UTC
beautiful!
Regina G. Jan 26, 2009, 10:20am UTC
very nice
necee t. Jan 27, 2009, 12:26am UTC
oh wow Renee... this is really beautiful... God bless you and yours...
Shaunee C. Jan 27, 2009, 9:28pm UTC
Nicely done great words
Sharon B. Jan 28, 2009, 11:50am UTC
awesome
Ainsley Jo Phillips Feb 3, 2009, 12:47am UTC
This is a sweet lullaby of a poem!
Elsie Duggan Feb 4, 2009, 1:30am UTC
A lovely poem Renee, my best wishes to you.
Ratandeep Satwant Singh Feb 6, 2009, 12:35pm UTC
Beautiful verse!
Roberta Moto Feb 6, 2009, 2:48pm UTC
beautiful poem
Lou Anne L. Feb 6, 2009, 9:17pm UTC
filled with sentiment and love
Patti M. Feb 10, 2009, 7:58pm UTC
Nice poem.
Patti M. Feb 10, 2009, 7:59pm UTC
Thank you for your comment on my post about Larry and I.
Sheila Deeth Feb 10, 2009, 10:08pm UTC
Beautiful!
que.e.duck . Feb 12, 2009, 10:06pm UTC
a well written beautiful poem.
Svetlana Goryacheva Feb 13, 2009, 12:58pm UTC
What a lovely piece! :-)

Blessings and best wishes from Moscow - S.
Terry M. Feb 18, 2009, 5:35pm UTC
Thanks for sharing.
Janie E. Feb 19, 2009, 11:57pm UTC
Beautiful poem, Renee!!!
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Ginger C. Feb 28, 2009, 11:44pm UTC
You write some wonderful poem Renee!


I'm Surfing Gather, dropping by from Points Nation! ;-)
Tee B. Mar 1, 2009, 10:30pm UTC
Stopping by from Points Nation to say,
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theresa s. Mar 3, 2009, 2:32pm UTC
thanks for sharing

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