by Christine K.
Member since:
June 23, 2007

My First Snippet

January 20, 2009 08:12 PM EST
views: 119 | comments: 31

If only I could do,

Things like I used to,

I would be happy,

To be the old me.

Oh well maybe tomorrow!

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Comments: 31

Lin B. Jan 20, 2009, 8:16pm EST
Excellent word crafting
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 20, 2009, 8:19pm EST
great poem, can tell its from the heart
Kerrell g. Jan 20, 2009, 8:25pm EST
It's a start!!!!
Beth G. Jan 20, 2009, 8:26pm EST
This was cute, very good Christine!
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Jan 20, 2009, 8:38pm EST
Well put , I feel the same way.
thanks
Priscilla P. Jan 20, 2009, 8:52pm EST
Yep, there is always tomorrow
tammie p. Jan 20, 2009, 8:54pm EST
very nice
Marie J. R. Jan 20, 2009, 9:23pm EST

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You are Blessed dear heart,,, good thought,,,
Kris P. Jan 20, 2009, 9:37pm EST
Great job!
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Jan 20, 2009, 10:00pm EST
Good stuff!!
Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. Jan 20, 2009, 10:11pm EST
That's terrific, Christine!
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 20, 2009, 10:12pm EST
Well done.
Jennifer N. Jan 21, 2009, 1:51am EST
This is really light and fun, Christine!
Elaine S. Jan 21, 2009, 5:45am EST
Well said
I can relate
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 21, 2009, 7:05am EST
That is cute
Kushal Poddar Jan 21, 2009, 7:39am EST
Certainly it is not the last for we like this.

straw girl’s unnatural muse
LeeAnn D. Jan 21, 2009, 7:45am EST
Very nice. Something many of us can relate to.
Sheila J. Jan 21, 2009, 8:16am EST
I understand these feelings well Christine! Thanks for sharing!
ashley a. Jan 21, 2009, 9:02am EST
very nice:)
Haim Kadman Jan 21, 2009, 1:16pm EST
Well done and do please create more.
Christy F. Jan 21, 2009, 2:25pm EST
You did GREAT! Well done!
Laurie R. Jan 21, 2009, 3:18pm EST
good job Christine.
Linda M. Jan 23, 2009, 12:16am EST
Great job
rainne chandler Jan 23, 2009, 10:55am EST
i like it it should be gathers motto
Michelle W. Jan 24, 2009, 10:26am EST
Never put off til tomorrow ....

great snippet
Veronica Hosking Feb 24, 2009, 1:58pm EST
There are days I can relate.
Alison H. Feb 24, 2009, 8:33pm EST
Good poem. Sometimes "you don't know what you got till it's gone," as Joni Mitchell sings. Too often we don't appreciate what we had, OR what we have, when we look at what we've lost.
(Jasper,(Disciple for Christ. w. Apr 15, 2009, 10:53am EDT
That is a cool poem.
Shelbia C. Jul 11, 2009, 2:01pm EDT

great job
Dawn (fly on the wall) Jul 11, 2009, 2:28pm EDT

i know right...i wish that sometimes

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