by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

The way it feels.....

January 16, 2009 02:18 AM EST (Updated: January 16, 2009 02:58 PM EST)
views: 84 | rating: 10/10 (23 votes) | comments: 31

So many deep feelings,

Crushed in the blink of an eye,

Once the top of the world,

Now the bottom of the pit,

The way it feels.

 

Once the best thing ever,

Worst choice you could have made,

Raise you up to the heavens,

Fall back down on your face,

The way it feels.

 

Thinking with your heart,

Not always doing whats right,

What feels good now,

Wont always get you through the fight,

The way it feels.

 

Nation

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Comments: 31

Linda T. Jan 16, 2009, 2:24am EST
Sounds like the roller coaster of life and love. Each has it's ups and downs. The best thing to do is hold on tight.
Steph-in-NE ..... Jan 16, 2009, 2:26am EST
this is good I love it and thanks for sharing,,
Krystal Harwell Jan 16, 2009, 2:28am EST
sounds like my life... thanks for sharing :)
Leah Christensen Jan 16, 2009, 2:36am EST
A very accurate picture of what a lot of people are going through.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Jan 16, 2009, 2:53am EST
Sounds like my life but it will and it shall get better because I WILL it so.
charity kimball ツ Jan 16, 2009, 3:07am EST
NICE POST:)
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 16, 2009, 3:12am EST
great poem, thanks for sharing!
dean t. Jan 16, 2009, 4:25am EST
Roller coaster.
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 16, 2009, 5:51am EST
very good poem
Dorothy H. Jan 16, 2009, 6:09am EST
I've been there.
Amy just hangin' out M. Jan 16, 2009, 7:33am EST
This comment is to let you know that I stopped by. Sorry for the generic comment, but I am trying to help as many people as possible to reach their Gather goals. Have a great day!
kimberly g. Jan 16, 2009, 7:36am EST
Thanks for sharing Nation. I love reading your posts!
ashley a. Jan 16, 2009, 8:03am EST
great poem thanks for sharing
Kimberly Ripley Jan 16, 2009, 8:29am EST
A clear depiction of life and love's highs and lows.
Lisa Frost Jan 16, 2009, 9:09am EST
definitely how life feels! great write
Laurie R. Jan 16, 2009, 9:19am EST
Great job Nation. Love the flow.
karen h. Jan 16, 2009, 9:20am EST
great poem it should be published
Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Jan 16, 2009, 9:21am EST
Nice work.
tammie p. Jan 16, 2009, 9:41am EST
so very nice
Desiree T. Jan 16, 2009, 10:41am EST
thank you very much!
Cindy B. Jan 16, 2009, 11:48am EST
Great poem! =)
♥♥LoViNg♥LiFe♥ ♥♥ Jan 16, 2009, 2:02pm EST
this is great! Love it
Wilhelmine Estabrook Jan 16, 2009, 2:02pm EST
I can hear Leonard Cohen singing this.
Angela A. Jan 16, 2009, 5:18pm EST
My group is growing bigger and bigger by the day. So from now on, I can only leave a simple comment, sorry for that.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
rainne chandler Jan 17, 2009, 4:03pm EST
wonderful thank you nation
Kris P. Jan 17, 2009, 7:33pm EST
Ups and downs in relationships, the joy and pain...oh so true.
Lisa Madona U. Jan 21, 2009, 9:22am EST
sweet
Elise w. Jan 25, 2009, 10:49pm EST
that's the way it feels sometimes. I fall down and get dirt all over me and I just have to get up, brush it off and move on. that's how it feels.

very good, Nation. :-)
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 27, 2009, 10:09pm EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful week!
Janie E. Feb 9, 2009, 12:14am EST
Ah!! We, all, go through our ups an downs!!

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