by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

Right now.....

January 13, 2009 11:02 AM EST
views: 89 | rating: 10/10 (22 votes) | comments: 29

Words cannot express,

Emotions I feel about you,

Shivers down my spine,

Right now.

 

Endless smiles for you,

Heartbeats so fast,

Love fills my soul,

Right now.

 

Talking about nothing,

Dreaming of your face,

Longing for a touch,

Right now.

 

Lifting me up,

Bringing me back down,

Making my world complete,

Right now.

 

Nation !!!!!!

 

 

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Comments: 29

DiAnA D. Jan 13, 2009, 11:03am EST
very good!
Peter Joseph Swanson Jan 13, 2009, 11:03am EST
Love can hurt
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 13, 2009, 11:05am EST
I like it.
Teresa A. Jan 13, 2009, 11:09am EST
Beautiful
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Jan 13, 2009, 11:10am EST
Gets right to the point beautifully
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 13, 2009, 11:13am EST
very good, strong use of emotions
Laurie R. Jan 13, 2009, 11:14am EST
Your feelings are expressed very well. This is good.
Joann Nicole Jan 13, 2009, 11:18am EST
good job! never stop writing!
Chloe A. Jan 13, 2009, 11:59am EST
You've got it bad...and you've said it beautifully!
Jamie Kiser Jan 13, 2009, 12:04pm EST
nice
tammie p. Jan 13, 2009, 1:00pm EST
this was simply beautiful
Leah Christensen Jan 13, 2009, 2:27pm EST
You are such a fantastic poet!
Kris P. Jan 13, 2009, 2:43pm EST
Shivers down my spine too! Great job!
Paula C. Jan 13, 2009, 5:47pm EST
great post. I hope you will consider reposting to Only Pictures

If you haven't joined Only Pictures Please click on the link and check us out. We are trying to get 500 members in the group by the end of January to help each other gain the maximum number of comments.
Denise W. Jan 13, 2009, 5:52pm EST
Thank you for sharing
Sharla H. Jan 13, 2009, 6:21pm EST
thanks for sharing
Barbara B. Jan 13, 2009, 7:41pm EST
Nation, such beauty and love you create with these words !!
Linda T. Jan 13, 2009, 7:49pm EST
romance lives in your poems
Angela A. Jan 13, 2009, 8:09pm EST
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Jan 13, 2009, 8:58pm EST
Beautiful poem.
rainne chandler Jan 15, 2009, 1:44pm EST
i love it
Christine K. Jan 15, 2009, 6:01pm EST
You have a wonderful way with your words~ Excellent!
Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Jan 18, 2009, 6:31pm EST
Someone you care about...;)
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 25, 2009, 8:40pm EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful weekend!
Janie E. Feb 5, 2009, 6:03pm EST
Beautiful and very romantic poem!

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