by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

Hearing you.....

January 12, 2009 09:25 PM EST (Updated: January 19, 2009 05:04 PM EST)
views: 105 | comments: 36

When I'm feeling down,

With pressures always there,

I would never last,

Without hearing with you.

 

When comfort is needed,

A friend at my side,

Nothing compares to,

When I'm hearing you.

 

No one understands,

Troubles I feel,

Cant wait until I am,

Hearing you.

 

The love I feel,

The respect intended,

The longing desire met,

Hearing you.

 

When the world seems bad,

All things seem to anger me,

Everything comes together,

When I'm hearing you.

 

I am content,

I am fulfilled,

All that was needed was,

Me hearing you.

 

Nation !!!!....

 

 

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Comments: 36

Marianne R. Jan 12, 2009, 9:31pm EST
10 for you
Angela K .. Jan 12, 2009, 9:32pm EST
...Great and heartfelt....
Mary M. Jan 12, 2009, 9:34pm EST
Very good one. I feel this way about my husband!
Leah Christensen Jan 12, 2009, 9:40pm EST
That's a great one. A 10 for you.
Lee P. Jan 12, 2009, 9:41pm EST
Awwwwww, who is the person you have in mind? It's nice. Thank you for sharing.
kimberly g. Jan 12, 2009, 9:42pm EST
that is a very sweet post.
Desiree T. Jan 12, 2009, 9:54pm EST
awww
C C. Jan 12, 2009, 10:03pm EST
that is very touching
Angela A. Jan 12, 2009, 10:04pm EST
Lovely prose..
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Linda T. Jan 12, 2009, 10:08pm EST
very sweet
Laurie R. Jan 12, 2009, 10:08pm EST
another very good one Nation. You do have a way with words.
Connie L. Jan 12, 2009, 10:10pm EST
very nice
tammie p. Jan 12, 2009, 10:11pm EST
this was just great . i really liked it. thank you nation for sharing this
Jamie Kiser Jan 12, 2009, 10:11pm EST
nice
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Jan 12, 2009, 10:18pm EST
Very sweet poem.
Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Jan 12, 2009, 10:30pm EST
Good friends are a treasure.
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Jan 12, 2009, 10:58pm EST
Very nice Nation.
Kris P. Jan 12, 2009, 11:12pm EST
So touching! Thank you Nation.
Kevin E. Jan 12, 2009, 11:14pm EST
This is awesome! So perfectly expressed thank you!
Lin B. Jan 12, 2009, 11:36pm EST
This is a lovely
Debby O. Jan 13, 2009, 12:11am EST
Nice work!
Vic Needs Coffee Jan 13, 2009, 12:41am EST
Very nice.
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 13, 2009, 7:24am EST
Thanks for posting on Helping out one another
Denise C. Jan 13, 2009, 8:16am EST
Another talented writer on Gather!
Cindy B. Jan 13, 2009, 11:06am EST
Sweet! =)
Joann Nicole Jan 13, 2009, 11:20am EST
damn.......lucky girl!!
Tonya Downen Jan 13, 2009, 4:00pm EST
Awww you are so sweet....
Barbara B. Jan 13, 2009, 7:44pm EST
Wish I had someone that would write poetry for me !!
This was simply fantastic Nation !!!!
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jan 15, 2009, 6:46am EST
Wow so in return I tell you continue !!!
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 25, 2009, 7:28pm EST
I am going through my backlog of articles created by you, my friends. I am so sorry that I do not have the time to spend on reading each of your articles in detail, but do know that I was here to leave a comment. God Bless and Have a wonderful weekend!
Janie E. Feb 5, 2009, 5:39pm EST
Such a sweet poem!!!
Kate Svenson Mar 3, 2009, 4:04am EST
Nice post, thank you
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:45pm EDT
very nice and sweet
Jamie Kiser Mar 15, 2009, 7:39am EDT
nice poem
doria c. Mar 15, 2009, 6:14pm EDT
Sometimes listening, is the best healing. Beautiful
Shelbia C. Apr 27, 2009, 11:37pm EDT
great

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