by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

The way you make me feel......

January 09, 2009 01:12 AM EST
views: 82 | rating: 10/10 (21 votes) | comments: 35

Like the best sunset ever seen,

The most wonderful dream dreamt,

My reason for wanting another day,

Cant live one moment without,

The way you make me feel.

 

My wish from a shooting star,

The hole filled in my heart,

Those unspoken words in your eyes,

Butterflies in my stomach prove,

The way you make me feel.

 

Fate draws me to you,

The melody I love to sing,

Joyful tears in my eyes,

Now and forever shows,

The way you make me feel.

 

To have known you were always there,

Realizing my hearts desire,

The meaning to my life,

From tonight till the end of time I need,

The way you make me feel.

 

Nation....

 

 

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Comments: 35

Lin B. Jan 9, 2009, 1:18am EST
Excellent word crafting.
Laurie R. Jan 9, 2009, 1:19am EST
Another very beautiful one Nation. I don't know how you do it. Very nice. Thanks for sharing this will all of us.
Jessica S. Jan 9, 2009, 1:24am EST
i have felt this way for someone, nation... you expressed it beautifully :)
Kim B. Jan 9, 2009, 1:59am EST
very nice.
Lisa Frost Jan 9, 2009, 3:33am EST
beautiful expression
Sandra H. Jan 9, 2009, 4:57am EST
Very well said! I enjoyed reading it!
JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Jan 9, 2009, 5:17am EST
It's the way it should be.
Spencer T. Jan 9, 2009, 6:15am EST
Deeply expressive and powerful. Love it.
kimberly g. Jan 9, 2009, 7:12am EST
good one Nation.
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 9, 2009, 7:48am EST
excellent poem and expression
Elise w. Jan 9, 2009, 8:48am EST
very nice! She should reward you with a big, fat kiss and hug for this one!

Good job, Nation. :-)
tammie p. Jan 9, 2009, 9:33am EST
you did a great job on this...beautiful words
Janie E. Jan 9, 2009, 9:56am EST
It's refreshing to know that you are a romantic!!!!!
J F. Jan 9, 2009, 10:08am EST
Sweet
Deb J. Jan 9, 2009, 10:20am EST
That's just Beautiful Nation!! Have a great Friday!!!
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Holli G. Jan 9, 2009, 10:30am EST
awwww so sweet
Terri V. Jan 9, 2009, 11:40am EST
excellent poem
Lisa Madona U. Jan 9, 2009, 12:25pm EST
so what's for dinner?......lol!!!!
Desiree T. Jan 9, 2009, 1:33pm EST
very cool!
Linda T. Jan 9, 2009, 2:20pm EST
very nice interpretation of how it feels to love someone
Jamie Kiser Jan 9, 2009, 3:55pm EST
very nice baby
Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Jan 9, 2009, 4:56pm EST
The part about the "hole in my heart" reminds me that Jesus filled the hole in mine. :)
Patricia J. Jan 9, 2009, 5:47pm EST
Wonderful poem, Nation. It speaks volumes.
Bree Clements Jan 9, 2009, 6:43pm EST
Wow that's incredible. Great job.
rainne chandler Jan 9, 2009, 7:18pm EST
wow
Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jan 9, 2009, 8:59pm EST
Thanks for sharing.
Have a great weekend.
Anita D. Jan 10, 2009, 12:01am EST
Needs some music. Very well put.
Angela A. Jan 11, 2009, 3:46pm EST
Excellent!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anything writing
Janell R. Jan 12, 2009, 1:30am EST
Excellent. Thanks for sharing.
Danielle P. Jan 12, 2009, 6:14am EST
Straight from the heart and wonderfully romantic.
Joann Nicole Jan 13, 2009, 11:23am EST
so so sweet!! One of my faves!!
Barbara B. Jan 13, 2009, 7:52pm EST
This left me breathless Nation !!!!
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 15, 2009, 5:04pm EST
Conner and Caeser, and their nieces, Cookie and Dixie give you 4 paws up!

God Bless!
Joseph Breunig Feb 8, 2009, 9:46am EST
An enjoyable piece. --Joe
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:43pm EDT
just lovely and you said you where shy lol

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