by Nation !!!!
Member since:
September 11, 2007

With you.....

January 06, 2009 09:33 PM EST
views: 79 | rating: 10/10 (27 votes) | comments: 42

With you life's worth living,

My reason for waking,

Deepest feelings felt,

The breath I consume,

With you.

My hearts completion,

Souls only mate,

Kisses so true,

Nothing else matters,

With you.

Loves best jewel,

Angel from above,

Wishes come true,

Everythings ok,

With you.

Your touch so amazing,

That smile so intense,

Eyes to get lost in,

Till death do us part,

With you.

 

Nation

 

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Comments: 42

Aimee "I Love Points" K. Jan 6, 2009, 9:33pm EST
nice job
.* Sandi * Jan 6, 2009, 9:33pm EST
this is really nice
Penny M. Jan 6, 2009, 9:34pm EST
nice
Lin B. Jan 6, 2009, 9:36pm EST
Excellent word crafting.
Kris P. Jan 6, 2009, 9:37pm EST
So beautiful!
Connie C. Jan 6, 2009, 9:37pm EST
Very nice!
Sheila J. Jan 6, 2009, 9:40pm EST
warm sentiments. Thanks for sharing.
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Jan 6, 2009, 9:40pm EST
Beautiful poem!
Dena A. Jan 6, 2009, 9:41pm EST
well done
Kushal Poddar Jan 6, 2009, 9:47pm EST
Well done.

Alive
Leah Christensen Jan 6, 2009, 9:53pm EST
WOW!!! That's absolutely beautiful.
Mary M. Jan 6, 2009, 9:53pm EST
That's how I feel about my husband. Very good work.
tammie p. Jan 6, 2009, 10:02pm EST
you did a great job on this one
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Jan 6, 2009, 10:05pm EST
Thanks for posting on Helping out one another
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jan 6, 2009, 10:19pm EST
This is really sweet and well worded
Marianne R. Jan 6, 2009, 10:30pm EST
Nice
Jennifer Lee Jan 6, 2009, 10:30pm EST
I hope that your love is eternal. Lovely poem.
Laurie R. Jan 6, 2009, 11:12pm EST
you definitely have a way with words. great job Nation.
Judy Kiser Jan 6, 2009, 11:17pm EST
A very nice poem!
CyberGwen ! Jan 6, 2009, 11:49pm EST
That is how I feel about my guy, but you said it A LOT better! good work.
Kimberly Ripley Jan 6, 2009, 11:49pm EST
Sweet....gentle yet powerful at the same time. Very nice!
Sandra L. Jan 7, 2009, 12:10am EST
Trying to catch up. Please forgive the copied post.
Nancy R. will view, may comment! Jan 7, 2009, 12:33am EST
amazing poem
Connie C. Jan 7, 2009, 12:35am EST
This is really good. I like it
Shaunee C. Jan 7, 2009, 12:49am EST
Excellent job
J W. Jan 7, 2009, 3:54am EST
beautiful poem
Cindy B. Jan 7, 2009, 4:53am EST
That was just beautiful! I love your poems so much! =)
Lisa Madona U. Jan 7, 2009, 5:42am EST
WOW! all I can say is...
Courtney C. Jan 7, 2009, 7:18am EST
Very nice :)
Spencer T. Jan 7, 2009, 10:48am EST
Right on. Good stuff. I like it. I like it.
Deb J. Jan 7, 2009, 3:19pm EST
I remember those days....but it's been a while for me!! Just concentrating on raising my 10 year old daughter on my own right now!!
It's snowing away here in MI!
SmileyCentral.com
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Jan 7, 2009, 4:14pm EST
Very nice love poem.
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jan 7, 2009, 8:57pm EST
10 - Here's wishing you much success this year!
Debby O. Jan 7, 2009, 10:29pm EST
Nice
Janell R. Jan 8, 2009, 12:42am EST
This is very nice.
enchanting style...words...and thoughts
Jamie Kiser Jan 8, 2009, 2:04pm EST
I love you too
Angela A. Jan 8, 2009, 7:03pm EST
Awesome poem friend!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Jan 8, 2009, 7:05pm EST
Nicely done! ;)
Barbara B. Jan 13, 2009, 7:59pm EST
I really love these words you pen Nation !!!!
Janie E. Jan 23, 2009, 1:03am EST
Very romantic poem, Nation!!!
rainne chandler Mar 9, 2009, 12:42pm EDT
wonderful

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