by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

The Kiss

January 01, 2009 02:51 PM UTC
views: 0 | comments: 20

She found that spot

(that certain spot)

on his bottom lip

and she nibbled,

enjoying his reaction.

Such sweet surrender!

So close their eyelashes

danced together


intermingled

open

giving

taking

soft and wet


his hands in her hair

drawing her even closer.

A warm rush of desire

flooding through her,

for what is as intimate

as such a kiss...

Comments: 20

Christine K. Jan 1, 2009, 2:53pm UTC
So much passion! Fantastic job!
Terry Collett Jan 1, 2009, 2:54pm UTC
Very well expressed.
Mark J. Jan 1, 2009, 2:55pm UTC
Suddenly I feel as though my face is all flush and aglow... is it getting warm in here?
Larry H. Jan 1, 2009, 3:08pm UTC
thanks for sharing your poem...
Jessica S. Jan 1, 2009, 3:51pm UTC
wow! very descriptive! i want to be kissed like that! ::pouts::
David H. Jan 1, 2009, 4:47pm UTC
Eyelash dance is a great description.
Janie E. Jan 1, 2009, 4:49pm UTC
Kisses have that effect!!!!! Wow!!!!
Elaine S. Jan 1, 2009, 5:00pm UTC
Very Good!
Spencer T. Jan 1, 2009, 6:02pm UTC
Very little can excite the sensualness as a kiss. Well done.

good stuff.
Heather M. Jan 1, 2009, 6:05pm UTC
Very nice.
Lisa Frost Bailey Jan 1, 2009, 8:15pm UTC
wonderful sensuality. it is rather warm in here..lol
Elsie Duggan Jan 2, 2009, 1:42am UTC
Beautiful Cheryl, feel like I've just been kissed, and it's nice.
Sue T. Jan 2, 2009, 5:28am UTC
A lovely sensual poem ~ thank you, Cheryl.
Kevin E. Jan 2, 2009, 1:32pm UTC
What a kiss! Cheryl you are so talented!
Jodie C. Jan 2, 2009, 3:05pm UTC
I love it!
William Dotani Jan 3, 2009, 11:40am UTC
Yes, the attraction intensifies with the wanted kiss.
Col. George W. Jan 3, 2009, 2:31pm UTC
I wonder if I have a similar spot. Want to find out? LOL

Was nice poem.
Priscilla P. Jan 5, 2009, 10:43pm UTC
Your imagery is divine

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