by Teri V.
Member since:
December 18, 2007

Poem:Closer

December 23, 2008 04:56 PM EST (Updated: December 23, 2008 04:58 PM EST)
views: 33 | rating: 10/10 (5 votes) | comments: 12

I run faster and faster

closer and closer

'Till I am next to you

Loving eyes that see

what the others don't

you voice like whispers on my soul

your touch like electricity on my skin

you can make me happy and sad

and angry and loving

your touch can make me sweat

and my body tingle and shiver

but I don't want it to end

I don't want to run

because in my heart

We can't exist without each other

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Comments: 12

Angela A. Dec 23, 2008, 5:01pm EST
Oooh, this is so powerful! Love, and not being able to live without the other..
I love it so much...
Have you joined my group, Anythingwriting ?
If not, please feel free to do so.
I would love to see your poetry there.
J W. Dec 23, 2008, 5:24pm EST
good poem
Teri V. Dec 23, 2008, 5:33pm EST
thank you
Nikki S. Dec 23, 2008, 5:50pm EST
Thanks for posting
Nikki S. Dec 23, 2008, 5:50pm EST
Rating a 10
Nikki S. Dec 23, 2008, 5:50pm EST
Paying it forward
Nikki S. Dec 23, 2008, 5:51pm EST
Please do the same
sam v. Dec 26, 2008, 8:53am EST
I LOVE YOU POOH BEAR!!!
Debra H. Dec 27, 2008, 7:30am EST
Beautiful!

Just dropping by to say hello and return a comment or two. Thanks for being who you are! Have a safe and sound New Year!
Rony J. Dec 27, 2008, 10:08pm EST
Love your style with words
Great poem
God Bless You
Debra H. Jan 3, 2009, 8:56pm EST
I'm trying hard to get caught up in my comments. Please accept my post and 10 for all your kind replies to my things, and forgive the redundancy.
Shelbia C. Jan 23, 2009, 2:46am EST
Wonderful poem

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