My Stone Garden Publishing editor Shirley Ann Howard (and she's an author, too, of Tales Out Of School) wrote a Gather article about writing and I made my comment. I decided to repost it as an article because I'm an unholy point whore, and I also want to change it a bit ...
On detail:
Use just enough detail, but not too much... KEEP IT MOVING. Never forget that people aren't stupid and they know what common things look like. Don't describe what you don't have to. It really is nice when your "visuals" have meaning to add to, or even replace, dialog or thought in the story. "Sets and Props" are important - if nothing else they give your reader things to "see".
KEEP IT MOVING.
On getting it all done:
I sometimes write the beginning and end, or end and beginning, and then fill in the middle. Then I'll need to change the end (and usually the beginning, too), to finally fit it all together. It gets crazy but that's the fun in it that drives me. I never outline. I always want it all to be a surprise for me, too.
With my Tinseltown Trilogy,
Hollywood Sinners was written straight through in order, beginning to end.
The Joan Crawford Murders was written all out of order.
Bad Movies was written all out of order.
When I'm done with my first draft, I call my first read through a "comb through", since there's things here and there that need changed to make it all fit with itself.
If I run out of ideas then I read what I've written and then take a long hot bath in the dark and I get more ideas in there than I know what to do with.
(there - I just rewrote it so it probably, now, makes even less sense !!!!)
Do you have any writing tips that help YOU ???


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My tip: Don't force yourself to write the story. If you feel like writing, but the story is feeling forced, write about whatever comes to mind. Who knows, maybe it's part of the story, and you just don't know it yet.
Uh, yeah, never try to get any writing done when your kid is in the room. It won't get done. They're always saying, "Mommy, I'm hungry, mommy, when's supper?, mommy, mommy... You get the drift.
And, here's another tip, don't write in the dark. It's rather hard to see the paper in front of you.
And, don't procrastinate. Or else... You won't do anything for a month.
Or a year.. or.. well, I'm a big procrastinator!
For some reason I have to actually write it out. Then I am adding lines in the margin and crossing things out. I just feel more free, I dunno.
It doesn't have the same affect if I type it in a word document.
Peter bathes in the dark. Interesting.
It makes sense to me, what you wrote. I generally write from start to finish but often I'll write a scene from "somewhere up ahead" because I have to get it done while it's bugging me to be written. My upcoming novel, Reasons, is the only one that came out all mixed up and reversed in the writing -- I wrote the end first and sort of leapfrogged my way backward.
You find that Yeti yet, Tracy? I can't seem to find him anywhere......
LOOK!
danger is fun - when it's all kept up in the noggin
Real danger on real mountainsides is not fun.
Do I have to flag this now ???
"Real danger on real mountainsides is not fun. "
Is it bad that that made me laugh, quite literally, out loud?
;)
Chelle M., I bet Yeti is warm under there
Do I have to flag this now ???
Um, no. Unless you use your boheinie inappropriately.
*starts to tap dance* ...
(oh, and you aren't shedding literal "water" - ha ha)
(laughs all the way to the loony bin)